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| Facebook Shoutout Requests |
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Posted by: Jade Harley - 06-24-2018, 10:40 AM - Forum: The Creative Corner
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Are you published? Trying to get published? Have a card game, video game, music album, etc. in the works? Looking for commissions? Are you producing something that you think your fellow Omniversians would be interested in?
Well, look no further! The Omniverse Facebook page could use some more content and we'd love to give you a shoutout. Just post in this here thread with a sample news release about your project. Please don't be upset if your project isn't promoted right away, it is important for us that we don't overload our current followership with content.
Here are the criteria:
-- Whatever you want to promote must be your own original content.
-- You must include ALL appropriate/applicable contact information, such as webpage links or e-mail addresses.
-- It does not violate the OOC Rules of Conduct and isn't generally offensive to any group.
-- May include non-explicit images ONLY.
All submissions will be thoroughly vetted by the moderator powers that be. When a post is added to the Facebook page, your post here will be deleted to ensure concise and on-topic discussion. We might message you to ask for more information or clarification on certain details; please be as honest and open as possible.
Thank you! :-)
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| NEO HYPER Book Club #9 (24th June - 8th July) |
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Posted by: Daniel - 06-24-2018, 08:01 AM - Forum: Omniverse Discussion
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Welcome to the Omniverse Book Club! Here, we put up a new completed topic every fortnight to read and review. By participating you'll earn a bonus 300 OM (subject to change) and you'll be able to suggest a topic of your own for the next fortnight. Aside from the helpful feedback, subjects of the book club will receive a Great or Exemplary bonus for their storyline if they qualify. :omni:
RULES
OOC Rules of Conduct apply.
We encourage helpful, well-considered feedback with both positive and negative comments. Try to remember that not everyone is confident about their writing, and negative feedback can be highly discouraging.
Review Writing Guidelines
Reviews must be a minimum of 150 words and should include your opinion on whether the participating member(s) deserve a bonus or not, and if yes, then 'Great' or 'Exemplary', according to the Bonus Rewards Guidelines. Please don't consider this an arbitrary number to fill; this just filters out those reviews that were clearly made with no effort.
Topics may include writing from multiple members. Please try to give everyone included a decent review and individual grade.
Try to go into detail about what you liked and didn't like about an RP. Try to keep it objective and positive: it's absolutely not okay to just tear down someone else's work without saying anything good about it. The more detail the better, and the more effort you put into your reviews the more likely we are to choose one of your topics to review, as thanks for your help to other members.
Please do not skim. If we suspect people are skimming topics, we may have to be more stringent on requirements, which makes it harder on staff to enforce, and more difficult for you to write your review. If we suspect particular members are skimming, we may bar them from future participation in the book club. This is free OM, so it's in everyone's best interest to keep it that way.
As far as grading goes, please be non-partisan. If you think your friend's topic truly merits Exemplary, awesome. But if we notice people constantly doing this and we consistently disagree with the gradings, we'll weigh your opinion far less than those who tend to give accurate gradings consistent with the Bonus Rewards Guidelines.
REWARDS
Book Club rewards will be awarded at the end of each fortnight, although it might take a while to get updated. Until you see a post in this topic saying "It was updated", it's safe to say you weren't missed or forgotten; we just haven't gotten around to it yet. No need to remind us. 
We will give the reward to the account you posted on, unless you request otherwise.
Those trying to become judges should note that Book Club reviews do count towards your total.
Book Club threads will run for two weeks. They will end on Sunday AEST roughly around 10:00pm (Australian Eastern Standard Time), which is 12:00pm GMT (Greenwich Mean Time) Sunday Afternoon.
Submissions
If you are submitting a thread for the Book Club review/grading please use this form after your review of the current thread. You're welcome, and encouraged to submit any completed topics or multi-topic storylines of your own that have yet to be graded and exceed 4000 words.
Code: [url=http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=0]Link to topic - name[/url]
Total character count including spaces (excluding bbcode, images, etcetera), please make sure this is per character, not as a whole:
Total word count (excluding bbcode, images, etcetera) please make sure this is per character, not as a whole:
Quest or Personal Storyline?
Participating characters (please list):
And finally ....
THIS FORTNIGHT'S STORY
More Coruscant shenanigans? Who DOESN'T love those? I welcome Kuzuru - as various NPCs - to the stage! Two Idiots And a Deathwish
No Word count, thread already received bonuses.
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| Kuroji Setsu Log |
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Posted by: Civic - 06-23-2018, 06:29 PM - Forum: Purchases and Deductions Log
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Purchases and Deductions for Kuroji Setsu go here!
Current post count: (your current post count, viewable below your avatar)
Current Earned OM: (your current Earned OM, viewable next to your posts)
Current Spent OM: (total, viewable on your roster)
Buying: (whatever it is you want to buy. If purchasing a move you MUST link to the approval). Cost: (the cost) OM
New Spent OM in category: (your new total spent on Moves, Powers or whatever it was you bought)
New Overall Spent OM: (your total Spent OM after the purchase)
All moves must be approved here before purchase.
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| Talos Quinn Log |
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Posted by: Civic - 06-23-2018, 06:18 PM - Forum: Purchases and Deductions Log
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Purchases and Deductions for Talos Quinn go here!
Current post count: (your current post count, viewable below your avatar)
Current Earned OM: (your current Earned OM, viewable next to your posts)
Current Spent OM: (total, viewable on your roster)
Buying: (whatever it is you want to buy. If purchasing a move you MUST link to the approval). Cost: (the cost) OM
New Spent OM in category: (your new total spent on Moves, Powers or whatever it was you bought)
New Overall Spent OM: (your total Spent OM after the purchase)
All moves must be approved here before purchase.
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| Corporal Light |
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Posted by: Corporal Light - 06-23-2018, 05:04 PM - Forum: Roster
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Name: CM-CpL 10093 "Corporal Light"
Spent OM: 5300
Consumed OM:
Proficiencies (2000): Physical Strength (1000), Ranged (1000)
Powers (3000/8000): Healing (3000)
Moves (300): DC-15s (300)
Super Moves (0):
Transformations (0):
Assists (0):
Items:
Artefacts:
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Unlocks (0):
Base Stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 3
SPD: 1
TEC: 3
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| Question related to archived rosters |
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Posted by: Corporal Light - 06-23-2018, 04:41 PM - Forum: Help Desk
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Does one make a new roster if one's current roster from a switched character is archived, or does one just unarchive the roster and edit it? I did the latter with Ballad for Isaac Clarke and I was wondering if that was the "proper" way or not.
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| Round 2 Notes |
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Posted by: Karl Jak - 06-23-2018, 03:50 PM - Forum: Dante's Abyss Junkyard
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In Round 2, the team that scored the highest will, by default, 'begin' the post order.
So if Person A and Person B scored 3.0 in Round 1 and are now facing the team of Person C and Person D, who scored a 2.8, the post order would be...
Person A -> Person C -> Person B -> Person D
If you hold posting precedence and you want to 'pass' it to the other team, you may. That'll be what this thread will be for.
Tomorrow morning, I'll go through and post the list of current matchups and the teams that will post first. In the meantime, you're more than welcome to do the math, if you wanna start planning now. I'll also post updated brackets.
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| Two Koopas, One Wario |
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Posted by: Wario - 06-23-2018, 03:12 PM - Forum: The Ashen Steppes
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Wario grinned his iconic toothy smile as his bike rumbled through the portal. It wasn't his first time falling through a portal. In fact, it seemed to happen very often. So the fat man was actually gently surprised when he realized that this was less of a wormhole or swirling endless abyss through which Wario had to fall, and more of an instant doorway. After all, he had just repaired his bike, and Wario figured that dropping through a wormhole with a bike wouldn't end well.
Wario instantly realized that he absolutely should have checked the signs before entering. This was a world of fire and ash. Wario's... unique physique meant that any sort of heat would be very unpleasant, indeed. The sweltering heat instantly drenched Wario's face with sweat and he felt his clothes starting to dampen already.
If Wario had any insight, he would have been worried about the state of his tires as they spun over the rough igneous rock of the Ashen Steppes. The relatively smooth path Wario had chosen was still bumpy from the cooled lava that froze mid-flow. In the distance, a giant volcano dominated the horizon, half of it split open and leaking like a cracked egg.
"Mamma-mia," Wario groaned, his words barely audible over the roar of his bike.
Wario had planned to ride aimlessly for a few minutes, when suddenly his bike jumped upwards, along with the squeak of a living creature. Wario shifted his weight accordingly, teeth gritted and eyes wide in surprise. The bike landed heavily on the craggy rock, miraculously still intact and carrying its passenger. Wario stopped the bike and hopped off. The fat man waddled over to where the bike had jumped. He wasn't concerned for the well-being of whatever he ran over, but in his experience, inciting incidents like these led to great treasure.
And he wasn't wrong. He had seemingly run over a Koopa Troopa, one of the ones from back home. Its shell was smashed to smithereens, but the turtle itself was still crawling around. The Troopa spat blood from its mouth and glared at Wario.
"Just my luck," the Koopa Troopa snarled, "I go looking – erk – looking for Apokalips Troopas and I find – cough – Wario."
"No need to sound disappointed, asshole," Wario cackled, stepping on the Troopa's trampled back with his foot. The turtle screamed as he did. “Is Bowser here? Seems like his kind of place. Very World 8.”
“Why should I tell you?”
“‘Cause I’m looking for work and if you tell me I won’t snap your back,” Wario cackled, “You remember how heavy I am, don’t you, Koopa?”
Wario put some more pressure on the turtle’s raw back, causing it to scream again.
“Okay, okay!” the Koopa Troopa wheezed, “I’ll tell you! Please, just stop!”
Wario lifted his foot and crossed his arms expectantly.
“He’s... he’s in the castle. To the north.”
“How far north?”
“Maybe 4 levels distance.”
“Levels?” Wario scowled. “Your king ain’t gonna throw me any of his welcome parties, is he?”
“Not if you bring me with you,” the turtle wheezed, pulling out a black and red flag from, well, frankly, who knew where Mushroom Kingdom creatures stored their things. “And this flag.”
Wario looked at him thoughtfully, before grinning widely again. If you were at Wario’s mercy, that was a smile you never wanted to see.
“Okay,” Wario smirked, then promptly threw his whole weight into an elbow slam.
***
Kevin Koopa grinned as he laid down his cards.
“Read it and weep, bitch,” Kevin chortled.
Kyle Koopa groaned and let his cards drop to the floor. He could never beat Kevin at cards. He wanted to just sit quietly for his shift, but noooo, Kevin wanted to play. What was more, the top platform of this guard tower was very tight, with just enough room for maybe three Koopa Troopas. It was awful enough that the tower was made of constantly hot stone, and captured all the sweltering heat into where they were. Now he was burning through his money too.
Kyle disdainfully tossed two coins at Kevin. The other Koopa continued to chuckle as he pocketed them.
“Something to do,” Kyle muttered as he looked away.
The tower was at least 60 feet in the air, and didn’t have much in the way of hand railings. The only way to get to the top was to climb the carved divots that the boss called a “ladder.” The inside of the tower was hollow, but Kevin could swear he heard something rumble every now and then. Kyle was less convinced. Who the hell would want to live in the towers?
Kevin’s eyes perked up at something. “Do you hear that?”
“Hear what?”
Kevin stood up, listening.
“Uh uh, I’m not falling for that again. Last time you did this I chased my shell for two hours-“
“Shut the hell up, Kyle. I hear something.”
Kyle groaned and rose to his feet as Kevin drew his binoculars. Kevin scanned the horizons before his jaw dropped.
“What?” Kyle asked, visibly more nervous.
“Erm,” Kevin attempted, “I, uh... You should take a look.”
Kevin handed Kyle his binoculars, his gaze unmoving. Kyle snatched them and looked where Kevin had looked.
He saw an obscenely obese man dressed in yellow and purple riding a motorcycle almost equally as large. Red plumes of dust chased its large wheels.
“God dammit, it’s Wario,” Kyle groaned bitterly, setting down the binoculars. “How the hell did you even hear-“
“Would you keep fucking looking!” Kevin snapped.
“A’ight, chill,” Kyle replied, looking again.
Once again (after briefly losing sight of the bike), Kyle saw Wario on his motorcycle. Badly attached to his handlebars, flapping in the red ash of the Steppes, was a black flag with the red outline of His Majesty’s head.
“Where the fuck did he get...”
Kyle peered more closely and noticed a rope tied around Wario’s engorged belly. As the bike jolted on the rough earth, a familiar Koopa’s unconscious face slid out from behind him.
“Is that Kenny?” Kyle exclaimed.
“Wait, Kenny? Gimme that.”
Kevin snatched the binoculars from Kyle and looked through. After a few seconds, he lowered the binoculars.
“Oh my God, he killed Kenny!”
"Blow the fucking horn, Kevin!" Kyle hollered, grabbing his flare gun.
Kevin dashed over to the giant horn perched at the top of the tower. He breathed in deeply and loudly, then blew into the horn. After an awkward second where the horn didn't make a sound except for amplified exhaling, the horn bellowed a note into the crimson skies. Meanwhile, Kyle fired the flare gun upwards, a bolt of blue light and smoke clashing against the red and grey ash clouds.
***
Wario had heard a loud horn earlier. He had ignored it. That was a poor choice.
A line of a dozen green-shelled Koopa Troopas were holding spears forward, completely blocking the path. As if that could injure Wario. Still, it would probably do some damage to his bike, and that would be a hassle. Wario growled as he jerked the bike to the side, sliding it and grinding the stone underneath into fine red dust.
"The fuck do you want?" Wario shouted.
From between the green-shelled soldiers marched forth a red-shelled Koopa Troopa. It had a long scar on its beak, visible even to Wario from his bike meters away.
"You seem to have killed one of ours," the red Koopa said, his voice deep and lordly, "That cannot stand. Get off the vehicle and surrender immediately in the name of His Burning Majesty, the Koopa King-"
"I don't wanna," Wario shouted back.
The red Koopa Troopa's jaw tightened irritably.
"Then we will be forced to apprehend you and bring you in for-"
"Wait, you arresting me for this one?" Wario yelled, pointing backwards with his thumb at the very dead Koopa Troopa, "I didn't kill him. It was an Apoka-whatever Troopa."
The red Troopa sneered. "You expect us to believe that the Apokalips Troopas killed a fine soldier like Kenny Koopa?"
"It was the last of them," Wario asserted, "They're all dead now, I guess. Good ol' Kenny here died fighting them."
"The Apokalips Troopas are all dead," the commander shouted back.
Wario pulled out the picture that he found on "Kenny".
"I don't fucking know, I’m new here. He said he was hunting them and offered a reward for helping. He died in battle, but so did the other exploding fuckers. Where's my reward?"
The wall of Koopa Troopas shuffled uncomfortably and started whispering. The Apokalips Troopas were still alive? The red Koopa Troopa raised his hand to quiet them.
"This seems more complicated than I expected," he said, "I should take you to His Burning Majesty."
"Where is the fucker, anyway?" Wario chortled.
The red Koopa Troopa scowled. "His Burning Majesty is in Castle Seven Dash Eight. One of our scouts can accompany you-"
"No thanks," Wario said, kicking the pedal of his bike. It roared to life, and the wall of Troopas broke in half to make way for his outrageous motorcycle.
The red Koopa Troopa sighed. He had heard Luigi was in the Omniverse not too long ago. He wished he stayed. At least Luigi was polite when he massacred them.
Quote:1549/5000 words.
- Get an assignment from Bowser
- Meet partner/rival
- Do the assignment before rival
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