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I was wondering, if anyone had some spare time on their hands, if they'd like to critique my last post. I haven't written in some time, and I felt when writing it that some parts were a little clunky.

http://omniverse-rpg.com/viewtopic.php?f...2500#p2500

There's the link if anyone's interested. Thanks!
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(07-16-2018, 06:14 PM)Lord Zedd Wrote: I'm here to kick ass and write compelling stories with Vincent Valentine.

And baby, we're all out of Vincent Valentine.


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