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How Can I Improve? - Kenpachi Zaraki - 09-23-2013
I was wondering, if anyone had some spare time on their hands, if they'd like to critique my last post. I haven't written in some time, and I felt when writing it that some parts were a little clunky.
http://omniverse-rpg.com/viewtopic.php?f=12&p=2500#p2500
There's the link if anyone's interested. Thanks!