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Just a quick question for all of you wonderful people!
How many of you are reading/ have read/ or have an interest in, reading my threads?
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I haven't read many of your posts, but the ones I have really riveted me and drawn me in. I've decided I'm gonna make more of a self-effort to read more of other peoples posts in my free time, though.
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I've read a couple posts here and there.
You are definitely improving as a writer. You're getting better at just letting the story flow out naturally, instead of forcing an unnecessary pace.
If you want some critique you can build from, heres some advice . . .
Try to cut down on passive verbs and adverbs. That way your sentences will have more meaning. Usually, you can find a unique verb that replaces them.
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Thanks DP! I wasn't actually looking for critique, rather than just seeing how many people have the time to or are reading my stuff. But thank you anyway!
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Ok. And I just figured I'd give u a tip just in cases u wanted one
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1W - 1L - 0D
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