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I wonder... - Cloud Strife - 04-17-2015
Just a quick question for all of you wonderful people!
How many of you are reading/ have read/ or have an interest in, reading my threads?
Re: I wonder... - Darth Vader - 04-17-2015
I haven't read many of your posts, but the ones I have really riveted me and drawn me in. I've decided I'm gonna make more of a self-effort to read more of other peoples posts in my free time, though.
Re: I wonder... - Miranda Frost - 04-17-2015
I generally dont read other peoples threads (something I need to start doing). Long posts like the ones commonly here generally turn me off. I read books because I love the flipping of the pages, the crisp paper between my fingers. Here I dont have that, just a white screen that easily scrolls. Its like a book here and not really. Its really strange for me. I will be starting to read the threads, however when it comes to those things I prefer to start at the beginning aaaanddd this place has a lot of threads.
Re: I wonder... - Cloud Strife - 04-17-2015
lucky for you seraph, I don't have 30 threads to sift through, I have one in the nexus and one in Camelot
and my posts arent that long... they vary from anywhere between 700 - 1300 words xD
Re: I wonder... - Deadpool - 04-17-2015
I've read a couple posts here and there.
You are definitely improving as a writer. You're getting better at just letting the story flow out naturally, instead of forcing an unnecessary pace.
If you want some critique you can build from, heres some advice . . .
Try to cut down on passive verbs and adverbs. That way your sentences will have more meaning. Usually, you can find a unique verb that replaces them.
Re: I wonder... - Cloud Strife - 04-18-2015
Thanks DP! I wasn't actually looking for critique, rather than just seeing how many people have the time to or are reading my stuff. But thank you anyway!
Re: I wonder... - Deadpool - 04-18-2015
Ok. And I just figured I'd give u a tip just in cases u wanted one