06-05-2016, 01:53 PM
As the title says, I'm doing a character arc (some of that SWEET, SWEET SOLO RP CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT) but I need to make sure I can do the things I'm planning. First think I'd like to get out of the way however
I got a plot summary at the bottom of this post. But take it as a idea of what'll happen (As a friend of mine put it "Roleplays never go as planned." Even solo ones, at least the ones made by me any who.)
Questions
1. The entire plot revolves around two groups of secondaries fighting each other. Both are destroyed in the end, but this is nonetheless world building (and character development) with a addition- and swift removal -from whatever there is of lore/background/whateveryoucallit that they produce. Is something like this permitted? (As in two groups of secondaries fighting, that is)
In detail: The Tribe of Sanity and Malicious Sons are fighting each other. They're both groups of secondaries, both having at least a hundred or so people with them. Both fight each other, and in the end of the thread, destroy each other, effectively making this miniature war/skirmish non-existent. Not that the outside would be affected or even care anyhow- this is just two insane tribes smashing each other over the head within a canyon of the Endless Dunes.
2. I'm unaware of how long this'll be, I originally planned to have around four threads splitting the plot into four parts with two pages each, however, as the quote in brackets states, things get unpredictable. So my only question here is: Is more than one thread permitted for each 'verse?
Of course spamming threads would be unnecessary, and only one would be the most favorable as I could imagine.
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As stated, here is the plot summary. Pardon me if my writing (or in this case, summarizing) is rather crude.
Fun fact, I plan to do two more of these!...I'm guessing the staff will hang me for this. Well here be the essay, if you don't wanna, feel free not to read it.
[spoiler]Using the Coruscant gate, Kalli enters the Endless Dunes. She shortly explores the Carrefore region, ignoring the warnings and signs of the increased hostilities outside of Carrefore. Summoning a motorcycle, she proceeds to go out into the desert on a quest of blind exploration. Little life was to be found up until sunset, where a patrol of the Malicious Sons- a large group of cannibal bandits -ambushed and knocked out the prime, bringing her back to their camp. Waking up in the dark of night and tied to a wooden pole and stripped of all her gear, Kalli proceeds to break free while gathering the attention of another prisoner, whom begs to be freed as well. And once freed, the prisoner then frees other prisoners, whom start a chain reaction of almost all the camp prisoners escaping in the mad dash for freedom that followed.
Sneaking about the camp during the chaos, Kalli reclaims her gear followed by an encounter with the Malicious Son’s leader; Malgore, a secondary who stands at 7ft with a body bruised, beaten and muscles barely contained within his own skin. The encounter is rather short, as Malgore is capable of grabbing and throwing Kalli some distance away, believing that his men would be able to subdue her. Combat ensues, and the prime escapes with any remaining prisoners into the canyons. From here, she meets Aoki, a warrior of the prisoners- and the one who begged for help -and reveals that him and the prisoners are members of a primitive tribe that once inhabited the dunes peacefully. This tribe, called the “Tribe of Sanity” as sworn to combat the Malicious Sons, and in combating them, the tribe has been reduced to this number of prisoners.
Only remaining with them until they reach their new home (the Tribes of Sanity having found an oasis in one of the canyon’s crevices) Kalli then prepares to leave, only to be asked by the leader of the tribes people to help them, this leader being an old woman called The Eldest. This woman is able to convince Kalli to stay after regretfully informing that the prime would be brutally tortured if she dared to leave the canyon, especially since the Malicious Sons would gain much influence for capturing- and killing -a prime. Despite how temporary death is, Kalli is sickened by the idea of being tortured at the hands of the cannibals. Deciding to join the tribe in their effort to rid of the Malicious Sons from the canyon, she volunteers to help the tribe's warriors.
A plan is set up by the warriors of the tribe in order to be victorious against the Malicious Sons:
After a week spent recovering from her wounds (and constructing a leg brace for her broken leg) the prime and the Tribe of Sanity’s warriors ride out into the canyon pass, the Malicious Sons follow up by charging them from the front. The battle follows, casualties, crashing, etc. But Malgore never appears, leading all of the tribe warriors to become suspicious. Hurrying home, numerous vehicles are seen outside the crevice that served as an entrance to the tribe’s oasis, the warriors quickly rush inside hearing the sounds of war echo and the smell of their homes burning. Meanwhile Kalli followed a few seconds later, preparing herself mentally for what was to come.
While the tribe is being razed and groups of warriors fight, Kalli finds Malgore, attacking him without warning. The two battle it out, Kalli becoming exhausted over time as they punch, shoot and stab each other, or at least try to. Nearly knocking Kalli unconscious by one swift strike, Malgore then proceeds to take Kalli’s autogun, shooting down Aoki- who rushed in trying to help -killing him in a matter of seconds before turning to shoot prime. However, using stealth, she is able to flank and leap onto Malgore’s back, stabbing him in the head repeatedly, killing him.
The Malicious Sons retreat as their screams echo with Malgore’s death, running and disappearing into the canyon, unorganized and without a leader. The tribe however does not celebrate, instead the small band of people that is the last of the tribe gathers for a burial. Kalli dissolves her autogun, ashamed that it was used to kill Aoki.
The next morning, the Eldest gives a half-speech half-prayer at the front of all the graves. Once it’s done, she gives Kalli a necklace that belongs to their warriors, a small reward for helping the tribe. Then the Eldest declares that they are to leave the canyon, as the remaining Malicious Sons will always come back here in search of them if they were to remain here.
Kalli waits in the canyon until the the tribe is out of sight (as well as making a new weapon- a shiny, metallic recurve bow, with a quiver of arrows having the same futuristic design) Kalli travels back to the gates of Carrefore. Before leaving through the gate that leads to the Nexus, she looks at the warrior necklace, noticing something- Omni’s face, the eyeless, white, godlike creature that ‘summoned’ her to this universe, was on the center ornament of the necklace. Her sorrow disappears for a moment, curious, confused and surprised at why the tribes people worshiped and knew of this being. Shrugging off the numerous unanswerable questions, she walks through the gate back to the Nexus, seeking to forget all that happened.
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I got a plot summary at the bottom of this post. But take it as a idea of what'll happen (As a friend of mine put it "Roleplays never go as planned." Even solo ones, at least the ones made by me any who.)
Questions
1. The entire plot revolves around two groups of secondaries fighting each other. Both are destroyed in the end, but this is nonetheless world building (and character development) with a addition- and swift removal -from whatever there is of lore/background/whateveryoucallit that they produce. Is something like this permitted? (As in two groups of secondaries fighting, that is)
In detail: The Tribe of Sanity and Malicious Sons are fighting each other. They're both groups of secondaries, both having at least a hundred or so people with them. Both fight each other, and in the end of the thread, destroy each other, effectively making this miniature war/skirmish non-existent. Not that the outside would be affected or even care anyhow- this is just two insane tribes smashing each other over the head within a canyon of the Endless Dunes.
2. I'm unaware of how long this'll be, I originally planned to have around four threads splitting the plot into four parts with two pages each, however, as the quote in brackets states, things get unpredictable. So my only question here is: Is more than one thread permitted for each 'verse?
Of course spamming threads would be unnecessary, and only one would be the most favorable as I could imagine.
----
As stated, here is the plot summary. Pardon me if my writing (or in this case, summarizing) is rather crude.
Fun fact, I plan to do two more of these!...I'm guessing the staff will hang me for this. Well here be the essay, if you don't wanna, feel free not to read it.
[spoiler]Using the Coruscant gate, Kalli enters the Endless Dunes. She shortly explores the Carrefore region, ignoring the warnings and signs of the increased hostilities outside of Carrefore. Summoning a motorcycle, she proceeds to go out into the desert on a quest of blind exploration. Little life was to be found up until sunset, where a patrol of the Malicious Sons- a large group of cannibal bandits -ambushed and knocked out the prime, bringing her back to their camp. Waking up in the dark of night and tied to a wooden pole and stripped of all her gear, Kalli proceeds to break free while gathering the attention of another prisoner, whom begs to be freed as well. And once freed, the prisoner then frees other prisoners, whom start a chain reaction of almost all the camp prisoners escaping in the mad dash for freedom that followed.
Sneaking about the camp during the chaos, Kalli reclaims her gear followed by an encounter with the Malicious Son’s leader; Malgore, a secondary who stands at 7ft with a body bruised, beaten and muscles barely contained within his own skin. The encounter is rather short, as Malgore is capable of grabbing and throwing Kalli some distance away, believing that his men would be able to subdue her. Combat ensues, and the prime escapes with any remaining prisoners into the canyons. From here, she meets Aoki, a warrior of the prisoners- and the one who begged for help -and reveals that him and the prisoners are members of a primitive tribe that once inhabited the dunes peacefully. This tribe, called the “Tribe of Sanity” as sworn to combat the Malicious Sons, and in combating them, the tribe has been reduced to this number of prisoners.
Only remaining with them until they reach their new home (the Tribes of Sanity having found an oasis in one of the canyon’s crevices) Kalli then prepares to leave, only to be asked by the leader of the tribes people to help them, this leader being an old woman called The Eldest. This woman is able to convince Kalli to stay after regretfully informing that the prime would be brutally tortured if she dared to leave the canyon, especially since the Malicious Sons would gain much influence for capturing- and killing -a prime. Despite how temporary death is, Kalli is sickened by the idea of being tortured at the hands of the cannibals. Deciding to join the tribe in their effort to rid of the Malicious Sons from the canyon, she volunteers to help the tribe's warriors.
A plan is set up by the warriors of the tribe in order to be victorious against the Malicious Sons:
- Gather intel on the Malicious Son’s camp and the vehicles at their disposal
- Find a nearby Imperial bunker that hasn’t been decommissioned, as well as holding parts to salvage.
- Construct the necessary vehicles and weapons to fight against the Malicious Sons.
- Destroy the outpost above the canyon’s main pass in order to decrease bandit control.
After a week spent recovering from her wounds (and constructing a leg brace for her broken leg) the prime and the Tribe of Sanity’s warriors ride out into the canyon pass, the Malicious Sons follow up by charging them from the front. The battle follows, casualties, crashing, etc. But Malgore never appears, leading all of the tribe warriors to become suspicious. Hurrying home, numerous vehicles are seen outside the crevice that served as an entrance to the tribe’s oasis, the warriors quickly rush inside hearing the sounds of war echo and the smell of their homes burning. Meanwhile Kalli followed a few seconds later, preparing herself mentally for what was to come.
While the tribe is being razed and groups of warriors fight, Kalli finds Malgore, attacking him without warning. The two battle it out, Kalli becoming exhausted over time as they punch, shoot and stab each other, or at least try to. Nearly knocking Kalli unconscious by one swift strike, Malgore then proceeds to take Kalli’s autogun, shooting down Aoki- who rushed in trying to help -killing him in a matter of seconds before turning to shoot prime. However, using stealth, she is able to flank and leap onto Malgore’s back, stabbing him in the head repeatedly, killing him.
The Malicious Sons retreat as their screams echo with Malgore’s death, running and disappearing into the canyon, unorganized and without a leader. The tribe however does not celebrate, instead the small band of people that is the last of the tribe gathers for a burial. Kalli dissolves her autogun, ashamed that it was used to kill Aoki.
The next morning, the Eldest gives a half-speech half-prayer at the front of all the graves. Once it’s done, she gives Kalli a necklace that belongs to their warriors, a small reward for helping the tribe. Then the Eldest declares that they are to leave the canyon, as the remaining Malicious Sons will always come back here in search of them if they were to remain here.
Kalli waits in the canyon until the the tribe is out of sight (as well as making a new weapon- a shiny, metallic recurve bow, with a quiver of arrows having the same futuristic design) Kalli travels back to the gates of Carrefore. Before leaving through the gate that leads to the Nexus, she looks at the warrior necklace, noticing something- Omni’s face, the eyeless, white, godlike creature that ‘summoned’ her to this universe, was on the center ornament of the necklace. Her sorrow disappears for a moment, curious, confused and surprised at why the tribes people worshiped and knew of this being. Shrugging off the numerous unanswerable questions, she walks through the gate back to the Nexus, seeking to forget all that happened.
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