Okay, I'm gonna base this on the way Vision judged the Avengers vs Centurion fight, 'cos the damage report seems like a fun thing to write... >.>
DAMAGE REPORT
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Before we begin, here is the reference from the Rules for a rough guide as to how much each point of damage is worth:
Quote:Minor Injury (1-2 damage points) A minor injury is something like a burn, cut or bruise.
Moderate Injury (3-4 damage points) A moderate injury is something like a deep cut, a burn, or an open wound on the arms, legs or torso.
Serious Injury (5-6 damage points) A serious injury is something like crushed digits, severe burns, an eye or face injury, or even a bone fracture.
Major Injury (7+ damage points) A major injury is something like a deep stab, a broken arm, a face wound, or any other extreme injury.
Cirno Post 1
Cirno damage taken:
8
• 1 point from a sword scratch.
(4 DEF is as durable as a suit of armour and Hecate only has 2 ATK, meaning she doesn't surpass normal human limitations, so a scratch isn't gonna mean much)
• 2 points from letting Hecate hit her a few times to show off.
• 3 points from getting stabbed in the side.
(and it's only that low because I'm being generous and assuming it's a very shallow stab wound)
• 2 points for a few more cuts on the back.
Hecate damage taken:
6
• 1 point from a kick in the gut.
• 4 points from getting thrown into a wall hard enough to break her ribs.
(normally I'd class that as at least a Serious Injury, but since I'm being lenient to Cirno, it only makes sense that Hecate get the same treatment)
Hecate Post 1
Cirno damage taken:
2
• 2 points from a flurry of small cuts.
Hecate damage taken:
9
• 3 points from 'Ice Sign: Icicle Fall'.
(2 base damage for a T1 Super Attack, +1 since Cirno's ATK is twice Hecate's DEF)
• 2 points for getting a hammer rammed into her gut.
(4 ATK is enough to break concrete with an normal move, by the way)
• 4 points for getting hit with a proper hammer swing.
Cirno Post 2
Cirno damage taken:
8
• 5 points for leaping into a storm of crossbow-bolt strength icicles to protect Daiyousei.
• 2 points from another few slashes.
Hecate damage taken:
6
• 3 points for 'surface damage' from some small icicles.
• 3 points for a punch in the jaw.
(a punch is a bit less powerful than a real move like the hammer)
Hecate Post 2
Cirno damage taken:
11
• 2 points from big surprise cut on the arm.
• 2 points from being stabbed in an open wound.
• 3 points from more stabbings in the chest.
• 4 points from getting a knife lodged in the shoulder.
Hecate damage taken:
13
• 3 from 'Ice Sign: Icicle Fall'.
• 4 from multiple punches, some of which hit broken ribs.
• 4 from getting hit with 'several' large lumps of ice.
• 1 point from being tackled to the ground.
• 1 point from being thrown away by Cirno.
(probably should be more than just 1, but I dunno how far she was actually thrown)
Cirno Post 3
Cirno damage taken:
5
• 2 points from a couple new wounds.
• 3 points form some more attacks...
(seriously, I don't even know how many hits you're taking any more)
Hecate damage taken:
14
• 4 points from getting hit by icicles 'too often for comfort'.
• 4 points from taking a headshot with an icicle.
• 3 points from a punch to the sternum.
• 3 points from a knee to the face.
Hecate Post 3
Cirno damage taken:
5
• 2 points for being stabbed again.
(in an unclear location)
• 3 points from fragments of ice with frightening speed.
Hecate damage taken:
3
• 3 points from 'Ice Sign: Icicle Fall'.
Total Damage:
Cirno; 39
Hecate; 51[/spoiler]
Notes[spoiler]
Note 1: I really dislike the rule that says Super Moves deal so little damage, because given how... un-dodged those were, I feel that Hecate ought to have taken a lot more than she did. Nevertheless, rules are rules.
Note 2: As you have probably realised by now, you are both dead.
Or should be, at least.
Injuries the likes of which you two were dealing to one another are not the sorts of things that can simply be shrugged off. Honestly, that's by far the biggest issue I have with your fight. Yeah, you both made some grammatical errors like forgetting capital letters or not using commas or not taking a new paragraph after speech...
But the thing that caught my attention the most was the misrepresentation of Stats. First of all, Cirno's ATK & DEF are both 4 in her Alt Form, meaning that she's tanky and hits hard as well... which sounds like it gives her an enormous advantage over Hecate... the thing is, Cirno has only 1 SPD, so with her Super Speed, Burst Movement & SPD 5, Hecate ought to have been able to run circles around her. The entire fight should have been Cirno growing more and more frustrated as she was unable to land a single move properly, then feeling really pleased with herself whenever she did land something.
Instead, Hecate just stood and took most of her attacks head on. Furthermore, I don't think either of you made it very clear how difficult it was for her to cut someone who is as durable “as though wearing armor all over” (that quote is taken from the Rules page on Stats).
That said, I can't really judge either of you on that, or on grammar, since you both did about the same in that regard... keep in mind, though, that not playing to your Stats will almost always cost you the fight if you do it against someone who represents theirs properly. What's more, successful attacks should be meaningful, so even if you do have high DEF, try to consider the implications of a hit before having it take place; being stabbed multiple times isn't something you can just forget about after a few seconds and keep fighting.
Oh, and you both probably would have done better if you had described your surroundings a bit more... and by a bit more, I mean a lot more. Between the two of you, I managed to gather that your location has at least one wall nearby and white cobbles on the ground... that's about it. Even if you don't make use of environmental weapons in your posts (which makes for an interesting read, by the way, and so is worth a try, even if they are technically weaker than actual moves), describing the scenery alone will earn you points.
Anyways, like I said, Ignoring the things that you both did about the same at...
I'd say it was a pretty close fight.
Cirno: Your posts were fast-paced and eventful, and in particular I really liked the part in the final round in which Cirno punched Hecate in the breastbone then knee'd her in the face; actions always seem more dramatic when you pay closer attention to them, which I would say made these blows sound more impactful than most of the stabbing with ice and swords that had been going on all fight. On top of that. Also, whilst your posts didn't quite reach the maximum word count, you managed to keep them at a fairly decent length all the way through.
Hecate: You include a lot of good descriptive terms in your posts, which allows the reader to more clearly visualise what was going on and get immersed in the story. On the negative side, your paragraphs are often bit too long, which makes it easy to get lost and breaks immersion. Try to cut them down a little, like Cirno and Dane have been doing. Also, whilst your first post was long enough and your second came close to the max, which was great... what happened at the end there? That last one was
very short.[/spoiler]
And so, in summary:
[spoiler]
The Winner is Cirno!
It was a close one, but ultimately you were just at too large a disadvantage, Hecate; you really need some super moves or assists or power-ups to do well in PvP... or something else to give yourself an edge, at least. As it was, your 3 SP were unused, whilst Cirno's 3 SP reduced your health by 9 points... almost half of your Max HP (which is 20).
Of course, if you had been a significantly better writer than Cirno, it would have been possible to come back from that, but it was never going to be easy. Making your final post so short just sealed the deal, unfortunately.
Cirno, well done! You can now decide to slay or spare Hecate.
For reference, since you both took such an inordinately huge number of injuries during that fight, I'm putting the pair of you on
19 Damage (1 HP remaining), so I'd suggest not getting into any more fights until after you've had time to heal.[/spoiler]
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