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Critique Jak/Marcus
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01-15-2017, 01:50 PM
It's been awhile since I've been here but I'd love tips on how to improve Marcus or Jak. I enjoy trying new stuff and writing different characters.
I'd appreciate it. ![[Image: oNAS6Nu.png]](https://i.imgur.com/oNAS6Nu.png) ![[Image: Darkdata.png]](http://omniverse-rpg.com/images/badges/Events/Darkdata.png) Jak/Mar- Dynamite Kid/ DA 2018" (Translated text)![[Image: hVDTXBF.gif]](https://i.imgur.com/hVDTXBF.gif) (Thanks Ezzy!)
01-15-2017, 02:00 PM
Maybe link a few threads so people can browse your writing and offer tips on that.
01-15-2017, 02:08 PM
http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?...5#pid92005- My latest thread for Jak/ There are no lines.
Jak/Mar- Dynamite Kid/ DA 2018" (Translated text)(Thanks Ezzy!) |
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