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Critique Jak/Marcus - Jak Mar - 01-15-2017
It's been awhile since I've been here but I'd love tips on how to improve Marcus or Jak. I enjoy trying new stuff and writing different characters.
I'd appreciate it.
RE: Critique Jak/Marcus - Ezrihel - 01-15-2017
Maybe link a few threads so people can browse your writing and offer tips on that.
RE: Critique Jak/Marcus - Jak Mar - 01-15-2017
http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=6314&pid=92005#pid92005- My latest thread for Jak/ There are no lines.