Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic

[Ezrihel]

Requesting some more money for "toys" :3

Link to topic
Personal storyline, participation bonus
Participants: Sylvan Ravenhead, Hunter Hayes
Total character count including spaces:
Hunter: 9,302
Sylvan: 17,005
Total word count
Hunter: 2,047
Sylvan: 3,755

Sylvan (20756 characters)- 208 OM
Hunter (1,999 words, 11278 characters)- 113 OM

Logs updated! - Jadedit!

[The Humble Sage]

http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=6273

Quest: Hand of the Empire

Character Count: 49583

Word Count: 9297 (Not including Storyteller which I wrote as well)

Just looking for a little clarity on this thread. Are both you and Seventeen attempting the Hand of the Empire Quest, or is only Trixie attempting the quest and Seventeen is along for the ride?

Just grade me. Seventeen already did it. So the latter.

QUEST COMPLETED

Trixie gains 300 OM and will enjoy increased influence with the Empire.

I would appreciate one more post handling the rest of the riot, but you have more than met the word requirements so I am confident that shouldn't be trouble for you. Good read from both of you guys!

Log updated! - Jadedit!

[The Vision]

Goku and I finished Twinkle in Sweet Repose.

Link to topic http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=8148
Quest or Personal Storyline?: Quest
Participating characters (please list): The Vision, Goku (Please disregard Marcus Wright)
Total character count including spaces (excluding bbcode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable):
Vision: 112043
Goku: 28218
Total word count (excluding bbcode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable):
Vision: 18899
Goku: 5097

[Remilia Scarlet]

two and a half years in the making. Doomguy completed the Void:
http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?...#pid110319

Probably should have taken half that, but oh well

[Alex]

You may enter the Oververse

Please PM Omni to arrange your meeting

[All Might]

Power Broker
Personal Storyline
Participating characters (please list): Veritas Night, All Might
Total character count including spaces: 
Veritas:7,599 characters
All Might: 31,467 characters
Total: 39,066
Total word count (excluding bbcode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable)
Veritas: 1,424 words
All Might: 5,524 words 
Total: 6,948

(All according to https://wordcounter.net/)

[The Humble Sage]

Goku and I finished Twinkle in Sweet Repose.

Link to topic http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=8148
Quest or Personal Storyline?: Quest
Participating characters (please list): The Vision, Goku (Please disregard Marcus Wright)
Total character count including spaces (excluding bbcode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable):
Vision: 112043
Goku: 28218
Total word count (excluding bbcode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable):
Vision: 18899
Goku: 5097

An excellent read! I appreciate the planning that evidently went into the storyline, and both of you know your characters quite well. As a programmer, I do love the pseudo-code you've given vision (although he should know better than to use his dead wife's name as his admin password. That's how you get hacked, Vis) Seeing the contrast between Vision's logical methodology, and Goku's intuitive hero-ing was also a treat.

You guys have also hit the word requirements solidly, and you have met the requirements of the questline. The only loose end I can see is that we do not hear anything from Lysander after the initial split. You can either address this in a conclusion post or leave it unmentioned, assuming he will simply join the lost souls of Silent Hill, but I figured I would point it out.


Vision has been given an artifact: Indigo Star Piece
Vision can expect a Camelot bounty for keeping the artifact.
Goku get's a thumbs up for a job well done! (Unless you want to fight vision for the artifact =P)

[The Vision]

Goku and I finished Twinkle in Sweet Repose.

Link to topic http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=8148
Quest or Personal Storyline?: Quest
Participating characters (please list): The Vision, Goku (Please disregard Marcus Wright)
Total character count including spaces (excluding bbcode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable):
Vision: 112043
Goku: 28218
Total word count (excluding bbcode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable):
Vision: 18899
Goku: 5097

An excellent read! I appreciate the planning that evidently went into the storyline, and both of you know your characters quite well. As a programmer, I do love the pseudo-code you've given vision (although he should know better than to use his dead wife's name as his admin password. That's how you get hacked, Vis) Seeing the contrast between Vision's logical methodology, and Goku's intuitive hero-ing was also a treat.

You guys have also hit the word requirements solidly, and you have met the requirements of the questline. The only loose end I can see is that we do not hear anything from Lysander after the initial split. You can either address this in a conclusion post or leave it unmentioned, assuming he will simply join the lost souls of Silent Hill, but I figured I would point it out.


Vision has been given an artifact: Indigo Star Piece
Vision can expect a Camelot bounty for keeping the artifact.
Goku get's a thumbs up for a job well done! (Unless you want to fight vision for the artifact =P)

SQUEEEE YOU NOTICED
Goku has already agreed to give me the Star Piece. I was waiting on the conclusion until after it got approved. Writing it soon...

Also, uh, what does it do?

[Moon Knight]

A Vigilante In Pursuit
Personal Storyline 
Participating Characters: Moon Knight, Jarvis NPC (Vision), Blair NPC (Marcus), Marcus Wright 
Total Character Count Including Spaces: Moon Knight: 32362, Marcus Wright (Including Blair): 3741, Jarvis (Vision): 17429
Total Word Count: Moon Knight: 5920, Marcus Wright (Including Blair): 693, Jarvis (Vision): 3116

Going to bump this and yes the embarrassing like that originally was there is fixed.

[Ezrihel]

A Vigilante In Pursuit
Personal Storyline 
Participating Characters: Moon Knight, Jarvis NPC (Vision), Blair NPC (Marcus), Marcus Wright 
Total Character Count Including Spaces: Moon Knight: 32362, Marcus Wright (Including Blair): 3741, Jarvis (Vision): 17429
Total Word Count: Moon Knight: 5920, Marcus Wright (Including Blair): 693, Jarvis (Vision): 3116

Going to bump this and yes the embarrassing like that originally was there is fixed.

While it was an interesting read, I had trouble keeping my place in your posts Moon Knight. You should work on the pacing of your sentences, otherwise they all sound kinda long and monotone. Aside from that, at times you can also feel a bit too wordy if that makes any sense. Like, I don't need you to state the werewolf's full title more than once really, or reiterate that the werewolf has a canine face- especially not in what's supposed to be a fast paced fight. Other than that I really enjoyed your writing. Your descriptions are nice and convey the setting well. =)

Moon Knight- 321 OM (5,912 words 32,103 characters)
Vision- 179 OM (3,094 words 17,861 characters)
Marcus Wright- 37 OM (684 words 3,671 characters)

Power Broker
Personal Storyline
Participating characters (please list): Veritas Night, All Might
Total character count including spaces: 
Veritas:7,599 characters
All Might: 31,467 characters
Total: 39,066
Total word count (excluding bbcode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable)
Veritas: 1,424 words
All Might: 5,524 words 
Total: 6,948

(All according to https://wordcounter.net/)

Veritas Night- 31 OM
All Might- 315 OM

Logs updated! - Jadedit.

[Alex]

Goku and I finished Twinkle in Sweet Repose.

Link to topic http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=8148
Quest or Personal Storyline?: Quest
Participating characters (please list): The Vision, Goku (Please disregard Marcus Wright)
Total character count including spaces (excluding bbcode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable):
Vision: 112043
Goku: 28218
Total word count (excluding bbcode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable):
Vision: 18899
Goku: 5097

An excellent read! I appreciate the planning that evidently went into the storyline, and both of you know your characters quite well. As a programmer, I do love the pseudo-code you've given vision (although he should know better than to use his dead wife's name as his admin password. That's how you get hacked, Vis) Seeing the contrast between Vision's logical methodology, and Goku's intuitive hero-ing was also a treat.

You guys have also hit the word requirements solidly, and you have met the requirements of the questline. The only loose end I can see is that we do not hear anything from Lysander after the initial split. You can either address this in a conclusion post or leave it unmentioned, assuming he will simply join the lost souls of Silent Hill, but I figured I would point it out.


Vision has been given an artifact: Indigo Star Piece
Vision can expect a Camelot bounty for keeping the artifact.
Goku get's a thumbs up for a job well done! (Unless you want to fight vision for the artifact =P)

SQUEEEE YOU NOTICED
Goku has already agreed to give me the Star Piece. I was waiting on the conclusion until after it got approved. Writing it soon...

Also, uh, what does it do?

Check your Inbox

[All Might]

The Hunter and the Hunted
Quest

The Hunter and the Hunted

Location: Coruscant (Tier 5)
Requirements: Must have completed The Hero This City Needs quest.
Difficulty: Moderate (5,000 to 10,000 words, depending on quality)
Reward: 300 OM and Increased renown with Coruscant Citizens OR 300 OM and Increased Fear among the Coruscant Underworld

There are bodies in the streets of Coruscant, and its getting worse every day. There is a cloud of paranoia and suspicion at every turn. The police are helpless, the criminals are tense, and families huddle in their houses in fear.

A serial killer is on the loose.

Quest stipulations: Track down and defeat the killer in Tier 5. Either turn the killer into the police for the reward 'Increased Renown among Coruscant Citizens' OR kill him to get the reward 'Increased Fear among the Coruscant Underworld'

Participating characters (please list): All Might
Total character count including spaces: 31,733
Total word count: 5,658

Both numbers are according to wordcounter.net

[Jade Harley]

The Hunter and the Hunted
Quest

The Hunter and the Hunted

Location: Coruscant (Tier 5)
Requirements: Must have completed The Hero This City Needs quest.
Difficulty: Moderate (5,000 to 10,000 words, depending on quality)
Reward: 300 OM and Increased renown with Coruscant Citizens OR 300 OM and Increased Fear among the Coruscant Underworld

There are bodies in the streets of Coruscant, and its getting worse every day. There is a cloud of paranoia and suspicion at every turn. The police are helpless, the criminals are tense, and families huddle in their houses in fear.

A serial killer is on the loose.

Quest stipulations: Track down and defeat the killer in Tier 5. Either turn the killer into the police for the reward 'Increased Renown among Coruscant Citizens' OR kill him to get the reward 'Increased Fear among the Coruscant Underworld'

Participating characters (please list): All Might
Total character count including spaces: 31,733
Total word count: 5,658

Both numbers are according to wordcounter.net

Quest complete! Because you have chosen the reward "300 OM and Increased renown with Coruscant Citizens", we are considering the removal of your Empire bounty. Although, while you HAVE completed the quest, you appear to be under some kind of weird impression about the law enforcement of Coruscant, shown below:

Once the Bomber, whoever he was, reached a higher Tier, the police of Tier Five weren't allowed to do anything about it. The upper tiers looked down on the law enforcement of the lower, and the lower weren't paid enough, anyway, to go chasing a serial killer through even harder to navigate science-fiction cityscapes.

This is all untrue. The police force in Coruscant is a united front, all officers or Stormtroopers follow the same regulations and enforce the same laws. I assume most receive the same compensation for their service, as well, outside of differences of rank. The only difference between law enforcement on the lower vs. the upper Tiers is that it is less prevalent on the lower Tiers. Also, it's a police state. The Imperial police of one Tier should be able to pursue a wanted criminal onto other Tiers.

You don't have to change this, we can just assume that All Might is being delusional or call it a slip in judgement, but I just want to make this clear to you.

[All Might]

This is all untrue. The police force in Coruscant is a united front, all officers or Stormtroopers follow the same regulations and enforce the same laws. I assume most receive the same compensation for their service, as well, outside of differences of rank. The only difference between law enforcement on the lower vs. the upper Tiers is that it is less prevalent on the lower Tiers. Also, it's a police state. The Imperial police of one Tier should be able to pursue a wanted criminal onto other Tiers.

You don't have to change this, we can just assume that All Might is being delusional or call it a slip in judgement, but I just want to make this clear to you.

Thanks for letting me know.

[Luci]

I would like a participation bonus, if this is the place to do that.


Link to topic- Hellsent http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=8154
Quest or Personal Storyline? Personal Storyline
Participating characters (please list): Luci, Renji

Total character count including spaces (excluding bbcode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable)
Luci- 19343
Renji- 15871

Total word count (excluding bbcode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable)
Luci- 3440
Renji-2869

[All Might]

Link to topic: A Promise of All Might
Personal Storyline.
Participating characters: All Might

Total character count including spaces: 98,071

Total word count: 17,672

According to wordcounter.net

[Jade Harley]

I would like a participation bonus, if this is the place to do that.


Link to topic- Hellsent  http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=8154
Quest or Personal Storyline? Personal Storyline
Participating characters (please list): Luci, Renji

Total character count including spaces (excluding bbcode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable)
Luci- 19343
Renji- 15871

Total word count (excluding bbcode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable)
Luci- 3440
Renji-2869

Participation bonus granted!

Renji: 158.71
Luci: 193.93

Log updates pending. They're updated! - Jadedit.

[Ebonywood Hellscythe]

Participation bonus, woot woot!
(Finally out of the Nexus with Ebony. It took a month, but we did it!)

Link to Thread: Alone in the Light
Quest or Personal Storyline? Personal Storyline
Participating characters: 
Ebonywood Hellscythe 
Vulre Oakenlimb 
Morene Fellon
and a couple of throwaway stormtrooper NPCs (James and Cody) that'll probably never return.

Total character count including spaces: (excluding BBCode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable)
Ebony: 61,578
Vulre: 19,754
Morene: 20,003

Total word count: (excluding BBCode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable)
Ebony: 10,965
Vulre: 3,400
Morene: 3,506

(wordcounter.net used)

[James Knight]

Link to Thread:  Here is Illegal Experimentation (There are no Lines) 
Quest or Personal Storyline? Quest 
Participating characters:
Veritas Night
Original NPC Doctor Kratz
Original NPC Doctor Johnson
NPC Secondary Storm Troopers

Total Word Count: 5247 
Total Character Count: 29142

I've finally gotten this quest done, took me a while but I finished it for the most part. I do have a couple of more posts I will be making later in it to truly finish it once it has been graded, if that is okay.

[Jade Harley]

Link to topic: A Promise of All Might
Personal Storyline.
Participating characters: All Might

Total character count including spaces: 98,071

Total word count: 17,672

According to wordcounter.net

Exemplary Writing Bonus granted! Marvelous work, pal!

All Might: 980.7 OM.

Participation bonus, woot woot!
(Finally out of the Nexus with Ebony. It took a month, but we did it!)

Link to Thread: Alone in the Light
Quest or Personal Storyline? Personal Storyline
Participating characters: 
Ebonywood Hellscythe 
Vulre Oakenlimb 
Morene Fellon
and a couple of throwaway stormtrooper NPCs (James and Cody) that'll probably never return.

Total character count including spaces: (excluding BBCode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable)
Ebony: 61,578
Vulre: 19,754
Morene: 20,003

Total word count: (excluding BBCode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable)
Ebony: 10,965
Vulre: 3,400
Morene: 3,506

(wordcounter.net used)

So I guess you could say Ebony wasn't very alone in the light, after all, huh? Great job, you guys.

Ebony: 615.94
Vulre: 197.59
Morene: 199.82

Link to Thread:  Here is Illegal Experimentation (There are no Lines) 
Quest or Personal Storyline? Quest 
Participating characters:
Veritas Night
Original NPC Doctor Kratz
Original NPC Doctor Johnson
NPC Secondary Storm Troopers

Total Word Count: 5247 
Total Character Count: 29142

I've finally gotten this quest done, took me a while but I finished it for the most part. I do have a couple of more posts I will be making later in it to truly finish it once it has been graded, if that is okay.

Quest complete! Your reward iiiiiiis:+300 OM and increased Influence with the Empire.

All logs will be updated momentarily! Logs updated! - Jadedit!