06-29-2017, 01:08 PM
Kanda:
I'll admit I don't know a lot about D. Gray Man's canon, but I can tell that you're really doing your best to flawlessly recreate Yu Kanda in the omniverse. I think, as a 1 on 1 duelist, he certainly can throw some weight around, but in a situation where he's outnumbered, the only defense he really has is his hurricane move.
It's a good thing he has that, too, because otherwise the double illusion thing would be pretty redundant. I can understand it qualifies as a sort of 'stance' for Yu to work with, so I'll let it slide. Out of your entire roster, I think the homing worms are the only non-standard move yu have now. It's a good start, but you need to find ways to give yourself options.
Mobility would be a good place to focus next, dashes, high jumps, wall clings, etc. Anything to help you with flyers. You could also write up some assists to help Yu fight. They don't have to be actual people; a spell that summons multiple flying swords that harrass dodgers would let you still be a solo fighter while giving you the tactical benefits of allies.
I'll admit I don't know a lot about D. Gray Man's canon, but I can tell that you're really doing your best to flawlessly recreate Yu Kanda in the omniverse. I think, as a 1 on 1 duelist, he certainly can throw some weight around, but in a situation where he's outnumbered, the only defense he really has is his hurricane move.
It's a good thing he has that, too, because otherwise the double illusion thing would be pretty redundant. I can understand it qualifies as a sort of 'stance' for Yu to work with, so I'll let it slide. Out of your entire roster, I think the homing worms are the only non-standard move yu have now. It's a good start, but you need to find ways to give yourself options.
Mobility would be a good place to focus next, dashes, high jumps, wall clings, etc. Anything to help you with flyers. You could also write up some assists to help Yu fight. They don't have to be actual people; a spell that summons multiple flying swords that harrass dodgers would let you still be a solo fighter while giving you the tactical benefits of allies.
And, we dream of home I dream of life out of here Their dreams are small My dreams don't know fear I got my heart full of hope I will change everything No matter what I'm told How impossible it seems We did it before And we'll do it again We're indestructible Even when we're tired And we've been here before Just you and I
Don't try to rescue me I don't need to be rescued
Don't try to rescue me I don't need to be rescued