06-27-2017, 11:56 AM
(This post was last modified: 06-27-2017, 11:57 AM by Jack Darby.)
[spoiler]
When he arrived in Camelot, the smell of fresh air assaulted Repliku’s nose. The air smelled purer and cleaner than any that he had ever inhaled before, making him stop near the gate and simply take a moment to breathe in. As he looked around the place and looked upwards he could see a floating island. What was the name of the island that he was seeing? It appeared to be immense, and Repliku knew he’d have to get up there somehow. How though? His attempt to make anything out of Omnilium thus far had been a complete and absolute failure because he hadn’t been able to succeed as of yet. Worry shot through him like a needle would sew thread, as Repliku was now concerned. If he couldn’t master the skill of summoning things using Omnilium, was he even going to be able to hold his own against the presence of Heartless? Fear was an emotion the clone had never felt, but now was feeling in spades as he began to walk from the gate of Camelot further inwards. Black creatures swarmed around him in a group of fifteen, Repliku recognized them. These were "Shadows" which were the weakest form of Heartless. Scowling at the presence of them, Repliku knew he'd have to fight them off before he could continue on his journey.
The fact they'd found him this soon though? It was worrying because he was nowhere near ready to engage them in combat. His power level was that of a beginner, and Repliku knew that if any more powerful Heartless showed up he was screwed. Slash, one of the Heartless dissipated but the heart didn't release from them. Of course, the Soul Eater wasn't a key-blade. Repliku needed one of those, but what did the blades do again? He couldn't honestly remember, nor could he remember how Riku had summoned one of them. Many of his memories, especially any relating to how any members of the Organization fought, or how his template or Sora fought were missing from his head. The clone was irritated. Another one of the Heartless lunged at him, only to meet its end on Soul Eater. The more he destroyed of the Heartless, the more relaxed Repliku felt as if doing this was a natural thing for him. Still, he’d need an easier way to vanquish the Heartless as if any of them came in larger numbers, they’d be problematic. Once he had finished his fifteen pest problem, Repliku sighed. He should really get up to that floating island, and have a look around, to see if he could find anything worth reading. Maybe if he played his cards right, there would be some books on magic there that he could exploit. Trying to create a bridge or stairway up to Dalaran without any clue as to what he was doing, The Replica of Riku once more failed.
"Damn it. Nothing I do is working," said the clone of Riku. "What does it take to master Omnilium properly?"
--------------------------------
[/spoiler]
Need some critique on this post before I post it up in Camelot.
When he arrived in Camelot, the smell of fresh air assaulted Repliku’s nose. The air smelled purer and cleaner than any that he had ever inhaled before, making him stop near the gate and simply take a moment to breathe in. As he looked around the place and looked upwards he could see a floating island. What was the name of the island that he was seeing? It appeared to be immense, and Repliku knew he’d have to get up there somehow. How though? His attempt to make anything out of Omnilium thus far had been a complete and absolute failure because he hadn’t been able to succeed as of yet. Worry shot through him like a needle would sew thread, as Repliku was now concerned. If he couldn’t master the skill of summoning things using Omnilium, was he even going to be able to hold his own against the presence of Heartless? Fear was an emotion the clone had never felt, but now was feeling in spades as he began to walk from the gate of Camelot further inwards. Black creatures swarmed around him in a group of fifteen, Repliku recognized them. These were "Shadows" which were the weakest form of Heartless. Scowling at the presence of them, Repliku knew he'd have to fight them off before he could continue on his journey.
The fact they'd found him this soon though? It was worrying because he was nowhere near ready to engage them in combat. His power level was that of a beginner, and Repliku knew that if any more powerful Heartless showed up he was screwed. Slash, one of the Heartless dissipated but the heart didn't release from them. Of course, the Soul Eater wasn't a key-blade. Repliku needed one of those, but what did the blades do again? He couldn't honestly remember, nor could he remember how Riku had summoned one of them. Many of his memories, especially any relating to how any members of the Organization fought, or how his template or Sora fought were missing from his head. The clone was irritated. Another one of the Heartless lunged at him, only to meet its end on Soul Eater. The more he destroyed of the Heartless, the more relaxed Repliku felt as if doing this was a natural thing for him. Still, he’d need an easier way to vanquish the Heartless as if any of them came in larger numbers, they’d be problematic. Once he had finished his fifteen pest problem, Repliku sighed. He should really get up to that floating island, and have a look around, to see if he could find anything worth reading. Maybe if he played his cards right, there would be some books on magic there that he could exploit. Trying to create a bridge or stairway up to Dalaran without any clue as to what he was doing, The Replica of Riku once more failed.
"Damn it. Nothing I do is working," said the clone of Riku. "What does it take to master Omnilium properly?"
--------------------------------
[/spoiler]
Need some critique on this post before I post it up in Camelot.