Abyss the Squid (Joining)

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Coiled Tentacle Cannon (600 OM) - Requires Ranged Proficiency, Elasticity
Abyss coils back both of her mechanical tentacles and starts to charge them up, before launching them as fast as and like launching a cannon, at full power at her opponent. While the attack doesn't require a lot of focus, Abyss has to be stationary to launch the tentacles, though she doesn't need to be on the ground to use it and she can take a hit and dodge while charging (Though she cannot parry while charging), and while the attack is as powerful enough as a bat going at 90 MPH, she has to charge up her tentacles for 5 seconds before launching the attack. Abyss can choose to launch one tentacle at a time to keep one tentacle available to use simultaneously with any of her other techniques, or she can launch both tentacles at once to deal twice as much damage at the opponent, but the attack would push back Abyss by 10 feet as recoil. The tentacles can reach up to 35 feet before falling down, and move as fast as a bullet.

I still need to know the stamina drain on this.

Balled Water (300 OM) - Requires Ranged Proficiency, Ranged Materialize Proficiency
Abyss creates a small ball made of scalding hot water by dragging moisture from the air and forming it into a ball-like shape 10 feet away from herself, before launching the ball at the opponent at 50 MPH. The water ball takes around 3 seconds to form is around 5 inches in diameter, and on contact with an opponent it bursts, hurting the opponent with scalding water. While Abyss can move while creating the ball of water, she hardly has to focus to create the ball of water, creating the ball of water drains her stamina a bit with every use, and the balled water can only go 50 feet before dissipating back into air. Abyss cannot use this move in tandem with her Hi-Speed Kick Combo, but she can use it in tandem with one of her Coiled Tentacles, but this makes her pretty tired after using the technique, making it so that Abyss needs a minute of rest after combining the Balled Water with a Coiled Tentacle.

Looks good. I asked in my last post about your wording because the grammar was incorrect and a little confusing. I changed the wording above to what I assume you meant.