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[Deadpool]

MADBULL34 wrote:
The shock-wave of the explosion rattles the dirt and splinters a nearby tree into a spray of wooden shrapnel.

I talked to Gildarts about this sentence, too (located in MADBULL34's 'I Carry a Badge' RP in the Astral Realm).
Basically, it's just a great example of how to pack solid detail into a sentence without saturating the reader with a lot of words.