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Your Best Lines - Gildarts - 07-09-2017 Can be quotes, can be descriptions, can be... anything less than a paragraph! Inspired by Harlan Higgs, post lines/ sentences you've written that you're proud of. Feel free to include other player's lines too! It's always nice when we writers know our well placed snippets are appreciated by our fellow writers! RE: Your Best Lines - Sarah Kerrigan - 07-09-2017 Someone refind that Okor post, quick! I'd post something of my own here but I don't think I've written anything good enough to quote >.< RE: Your Best Lines - Gildarts - 07-09-2017 (07-09-2017, 10:30 PM)Sarah Kerrigan Wrote: Someone refind that Okor post, quick! Maybe opt for something unique or notable- dialogue ? RE: Your Best Lines - King Ghidorah - 07-09-2017 This whole psychopathic monologue, from when Ghidorah killed Dawn, is something I'm pretty proud of. "There's a universe inside of every one of you pathetic micro-organisms, Dawnika Snow. Worlds of ambition and ideas - and I'm going to burn them to the ground. They collapse as you die, little pyres of secrets and possibilities. Utterly unique - exquisite. This world is beautiful, Dawnika - a marvel of complexity and texture, and every person in it only adds to its wonder." "I'm going to destroy it, Miss Snow. It's only when a thing is lost that it can be appreciated! I'm going to get my real body back, and then I'm going to ruin everything! And when there's nothing left of the Omniverse but wasted architecture and poisoned air, it will. Be. PERFECT!" RE: Your Best Lines - Gildarts - 07-09-2017 "...his bony build was that of an atrophied corpse covered in baggy clothing that drenched off of him as though soaked in water." I was really proud of this one because of the tone it set. It has to do with a nightmare scape in the astral realm done with my long standing secondary Behemoth who is a villain and illusionist. Writing with Higgs in his carnival because who else could even have a chance being more sinister than Behemoth? Harlan stands a good chance. RE: Your Best Lines - MADBULL34 - 07-10-2017 I thought my final lines from DA were pretty good: Quote:The cop's face had a ghoulish pallor and his eyes seemed a thousand miles away. With a hateful scowl, he spoke to the other three fighters, to Karl, and every voyeuristic viewer watching from the safety of home. “I spent a lifetime breathin’ the same filthy air as pimps and guidos, sharin’ a lung-full 'a smoke puffin’ off fatcats’ cigars and smelt the stinkin’ sweat rollin’ off a workin’ class man’s back. You two-bit comicbook geeks think ya know a thing or two about fightin’ it out…” RE: Your Best Lines - The Vision - 07-10-2017 Okay. [spoiler]So this one, Vision argues with Hellboy about Hellboy's goodness. Vision argues that Hellboy, as a demon, is intrinsically evil. Hellboy asks him about Ultron, to which Vision says: Quote:"I was created by a rogue AI named Ultron to destroy the peacekeeping organization known as the Avengers."[/spoiler] [spoiler]This one, after realizing his ally is a younger version of Magneto... Quote:Agent Ironheart struggled further against his bonds. In the process, the chain-link fence behind them seemed to bend slightly, making a large bowl surrounding the soldier. The metal seemed to quiver spontaneously, but Ironheart’s brow was furrowed in concentration, an expression he had once seen on the face of...[/spoiler] RE: Your Best Lines - Trixie - 07-10-2017 Quote:The room had gone quiet. A feud between the two female parties had begun and Sage growing frustrated; which was unusual for her. Beatrix narrowed her eyes, her pink irises slowly starting to glow. Wisps of pink mist began to vent from her figure as she too readied her energy; her goal wasn't to scare the valium addict so much as to assert that she meant business as well. Unbeknownst to Sage the demonic female had only dismissed it for the sake of situation. This is one of my favorite excerpts from a Saga in 2009 on another site where I wrote Vad. Magus' character Sage and me had rescued Vad's wife, Trixie, previously on Planet Frost home of Freeza's race and Sage couldn't understand why despite having been through that hell Trixie was able to operate as normal. The enemy was closing in and as a last ditch effort both Vad and his wife went to hold the line for as long as they could to give the rest of the Saga members a chance to survive. ((Note: Different Trixie.)) RE: Your Best Lines - The Vision - 07-10-2017 (07-09-2017, 10:32 PM)Gildarts Wrote:(07-09-2017, 10:30 PM)Sarah Kerrigan Wrote: Someone refind that Okor post, quick! Maybe she's talking about this. Quote:”You all think this is about you. That your… hatreds matter more than others, that your rage burns brighter than any other. That standing up to us makes you champions, figures of... Legend.” A snort of laughter broke the solemnity, the warrior no longer able to contain his mirth. ”I know I am but a pawn, a game piece of the gods. In the end, I’m nothing more than a… corpse, yet to drop.” RE: Your Best Lines - Beta Ray Bill - 07-10-2017 Dr. Doom: "These Heavens, they dare wish for Doom to fight for their entertainment." He began to chuckle a metallic laugh through his mask his brown eyes widening in anger. "Oh they will surly have their fun, the fun of death by the graceful hands of Doom for my mercy has run thin." Moon Knight: "Then Lets make this more violent." Hellboy: "Hey, pal take a picture it'll last longer," Hellboy said in an irritated tone. Scarecrow: Ether "HROOO HRAAAA!" Or "Tell ... me... how does... the fear feeel." RE: Your Best Lines - Harlan Higgs - 07-10-2017 (07-10-2017, 01:21 AM)MADBULL34 Wrote: I thought my final lines from DA were pretty good: That was probably my favorite speech in DA RE: Your Best Lines - Gildarts - 07-10-2017 (07-10-2017, 02:01 AM)The Vision Wrote:Effing true that!(07-09-2017, 10:32 PM)Gildarts Wrote:(07-09-2017, 10:30 PM)Sarah Kerrigan Wrote: Someone refind that Okor post, quick! Hard to double quote on my full but MB's was superb ^.^!!! All these so far are great <3 <3 <3 and inspired RE: Your Best Lines - Deadpool - 07-10-2017 Quote:MADBULL34 wrote: I talked to Gildarts about this sentence, too (located in MADBULL34's 'I Carry a Badge' RP in the Astral Realm). Basically, it's just a great example of how to pack solid detail into a sentence without saturating the reader with a lot of words. RE: Your Best Lines - Okor - 07-10-2017 An elbow careened into his stomach, the force behind it driving him back as a ravaged hand tore the pistol from his grip, the magickally enhanced maniac taking advantage of Okor’s currently reduced might to drive him back. A snarling smile split his savaged face, the frozen heart of hatred that had kept him alive for millennia triumphing over the animalistic intelligence that dwelled within his warplate. ”Everyone thinks they’re the… Hero, don’t they?” Rockwell stopped, confusion and curiosity seeping into his expression as he held the severed limb over his head, stopped mid-way through a skull-crushing strike. “The hell are you talking about?” ”You all think this is about you. That your… hatreds matter more than others, that your rage burns brighter than any other. That standing up to us makes you champions, figures of... Legend.” A snort of laughter broke the solemnity, the warrior no longer able to contain his mirth. ”I know I am but a pawn, a game piece of the gods. In the end, I’m nothing more than a… corpse, yet to drop.” Omnillium turned into rusted iron, a wickedly twisted blade scything towards the paused Strazio, a throat-tearing motion used upon battlefields and altars over the aeons. ”Pawn takes king.” RE: Your Best Lines - Gildarts - 07-16-2017 This one's a silly one XD "Had someone plunged in cotton candy guy's mind they would've seen the dark, greedy desire for world domination and unquenchable thirst senseless violence, malice that only came from working retail his whole life." RE: Your Best Lines - Strazio Rockwell - 07-20-2017 From my fight with Gamzee. Instead he braced for the attack, taking the entire brunt of the strike on his chest. His clavicle snapped and his ribs cracked, but he stood defiantly. Such a blow would slay a man, but Strazio was no man. No, he was the personification of pure rage, an avatar of anger. Strazio’s skin started to peel away, revealing a bright white figure underneath. His eyes filled with black and yellow. The avatar’s grin disappeared and he spoke “you think you know rage?” A roiling blast of destructive energy slammed into Gamzee’s chest sending him skidding away. Strazio’s body had been consumed by the burning energy. Every pain nerve flared to life and the mage gritted his teeth in acceptance of the agony. His hatred and fury far outweighed the pain of broken bones and bruised organs. “You don’t know rage, you’re just a tourist with a temper,” Strazio fired a bolt of searing white energy at the troll and shouted “I live here!” RE: Your Best Lines - The Vision - 07-21-2017 (07-20-2017, 03:36 PM)Strazio Rockwell Wrote: From my fight with Gamzee. DAAAAAAAMN RE: Your Best Lines - Alex - 07-21-2017 Quote:Although the impact was enough to knock some of the breath from his lungs, Shang kept his balance and his bearings, while his opponent was too battered to immediately press his advantage. Clipping the lightsaber inside his belt, the sorcerer pushed away from the wall. Bonus points --- STRAZIO LOST A FUCKING HAND IN THIS FIGHT BECAUSE STRAZIO IS ALWAYS FUCKING LOSING HANDS RE: Your Best Lines - Tearen Wover - 07-21-2017 Tearen scoffed and plopped a heavy hand on Jade's crown. "Slow your tears kiddo, ya barely know me." he said with a quaint smile. Jade blinked up at him with dewy eyes and a confused frown. That was...sort of true? She supposed? She understood that Tearen was just trying to dull the pain of his departure, but this was a pretty silly way of doing it. Regardless, the eldritch human fluffed his robes and sighed, producing a large stuffed crow from under the heavy brown rags. Rebecca's eyes lit up, despite their persistent glow, as Tearen handed the plush bird to her. She hugged it tight and he wondered just what her perception of this situation was. Would she always be expecting him to come back, or would her memory of him fade with time? The ex-enigma considered, for a fleeting moment, just pulling all memories of him from Rebecca's mind completely, but decided against it. The strings of her psyche has been plucked enough for one lifetime. Better to retire the pizzicato charade than take the easy road from guilt. RE: Your Best Lines - Jade Harley - 07-21-2017 Why are you all so perfect. I want you to understand. These quotes, passages, fricking masterpieces are all SO GOOD, just, my gods. I'm tearing up a little, like, damnit, you're all so incredibly special in your own ways of writing. There's so much voice here, the emotion and the triumph I get from reading these characters' words and actions, the exposure to the twisted, idealistic, fed up, and just plain vicious worldviews.... It's incredible. Simply incredible. I'm honored to live in such a time where these stories can be told in this way. I adore this place, thank you for sharing these glorious pieces of wordsmithery. You all deserve so much praise for continuing to write and grow. Good on you. |