12-17-2014, 09:55 PM
Okay welcome to the site. Just a few things that need fixing/clarification.
First, I get it may be just a fluff thing, but 'freezing' anything can be abused rather easily as it is essentially a stun/debuff. I'll have to say if you want to be able to freeze something with a touch, you need a Move for it at least and furthermore, the Debuff Proficiency if you want to use it in competitive play against other Prime PC's. Walking silently...yeah it's not the same as being invisible, but it could be seen as an application of Stealth which you would need to be, well, stealthy. Anyways, my point is if there is any special features about him that give him any specific advantage they need to be applications of Powers you have purchased/Proficiencies, and Moves in their own right.
It's like this Powers/Profs give you access to some inherent abilities, but Moves are specific applications therein. For example, you have the Ranged Proficiency that allows you to make Ranged Moves. That by itself wouldn't let you hurl a fireball at an opponent without having a Move that does that.
Hopefully that makes sense. It's fine to start with no Moves of course; I am just making sure you understand the concepts. So, yeah just fix up those couple things and I'll approve you.
First, I get it may be just a fluff thing, but 'freezing' anything can be abused rather easily as it is essentially a stun/debuff. I'll have to say if you want to be able to freeze something with a touch, you need a Move for it at least and furthermore, the Debuff Proficiency if you want to use it in competitive play against other Prime PC's. Walking silently...yeah it's not the same as being invisible, but it could be seen as an application of Stealth which you would need to be, well, stealthy. Anyways, my point is if there is any special features about him that give him any specific advantage they need to be applications of Powers you have purchased/Proficiencies, and Moves in their own right.
It's like this Powers/Profs give you access to some inherent abilities, but Moves are specific applications therein. For example, you have the Ranged Proficiency that allows you to make Ranged Moves. That by itself wouldn't let you hurl a fireball at an opponent without having a Move that does that.
Hopefully that makes sense. It's fine to start with no Moves of course; I am just making sure you understand the concepts. So, yeah just fix up those couple things and I'll approve you.
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