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Move Creation Workshop
(02-06-2017, 01:55 AM)Amaterasu Wrote:
(02-06-2017, 12:36 AM)Jacket Wrote: Ithaca 37 Stakeout: (600)
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A shotgun that has the capacity to hold four twelve gauge shots. The range on the weapon can go from short to medium. There is a spread in the shots that is four feet in width and can reach up to twenty yards even hitting multiple targets that are within the spread's width. Damage wise, it is effective up close but not for medium range which does a quarter of damage. For each round that is fired, it is required for a pump action so that the fresh buckshot can enter the chamber. Reload will take about three seconds to get all four shots in the gun. Jacket does have the ability to reload the shotgun at any number of rounds under the four count. For example, he can reload it at half capacity such as two shots and still shoot. This weapon can also be shot with one hand holding it due to the pistol grip.

Fire Axe: (300)
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A melee weapon that weighs at 6lbs and the length is 36 inches which includes the handle and head. The blade is sharp that can cut through mostly breakable material except tough metals. Swinging range is at 9 feet. This weapon will require two hands to use due to the weight and being successful with a complete swinging motion.

Tier 1 Power Up: (1000)
Rasmus Mask
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ATK: +1
DEF: +1
SPD: N/A
TEC: +3

Tier 1 Power Up: (1000)
Tony Mask
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ATK: +3
DEF: +1
SPD: +1
TEC: N/A

For the Stakeout:
-I would maybe add the numbers for what's short and medium ranges - I imagine that the 20 yards is the maximum range?
-I imagine that the shots only reach that four foot spread at their maximum range? In either case, something that large would require Area Attack Prof.
-Can the pump-action be done with just one hand (as you say the gun can be shot with one hand) or do you need both for that?
-Does reloading the gun early take less time than a full reload? If so, that would justify the 600 OM requirement, otherwise I think 300 is enough.

Fire Axe:
-"The blade is sharp that can cut through..." :frog:
-The damage is based on your ATK and your opponent's DEF, so I would take that out of the description. You can leave that it's a sharp weapon, though.

And both power-ups are unfortunately illegal, because you are allocating 3 out of 5 points into one stat. The spread needs to be +2/+2/+1 or +2/+1/+1/+1. You could maybe also note how long it takes to put them on, if Jacket removes his current mask and so on, but that's mainly fluff. Your choice.

Stakeout:
- 20 yards will be the maximum range
- I forgot that Jacket doesn't have the Area Attack Prof. whoops. (I will be making a purchase on that soon.)
- Now that you mention it, is it alright to let him have the ability to pump with one hand or does that add up the cost of OM for the move?
- It will take less time then a full reload. For example, if you just load one shot that will take under a second. (If that seems fair)

Fire Axe:
- I know, I derped out at this detail since it was late at night. Please forgive me from my stupidity.
- Okidoki

Here's the rearranged stats to make it balanced:

Rasmus Mask -
ATK: +2
DEF: +1
SPD: N/A
TEC: +2

Tony Mask -
ATK: +2
DEF: +1
SPD: +2
TEC: N/A
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