12-13-2016, 11:37 AM
Okay, first thing I should point out is that while i'm not a staff member, I am going to try and be helpful and offer what feedback I can based on my experience with the Omniverse. Any staff member can over rule what I suggest.
First thing I notice is that your account name and your character name are not the same. This is a bit of a problem, especially since it gives the idea that maybe you didn't read everything you were supposed to before joining. I don't know if a staff member can fix it, or if you will have to create a new account. I'm sure we can fix it though.
Second, Your stated spent OM and the things you are purchasing do not match. You have stated you spent 3500 OM, but your powers, proficiencies, and moves add up to 4500 OM.
Third, your move "Spear" How does he attack with it? In a jabbing motion, or is it more of a slashing weapon? Because it doesn't have ranged proficiency, do not expect to be able to go around throwing it. How heavy is it? Can you move while attacking with it?
Fourth, your super move "Jump" Do you hit a target directly with this? Or the ground next to them, which is inferred from you saying it can put you next to a target. What's the charge up on it? How long does it take to activate it, and can you move while doing so?
Finally, as I said before, I'm not a staff member, but peer feedback is a big part of the Omniverse, so I thought I'd lend my assistance in any way I could. A staff member can tell if you can ignore something I said, though I feel like most of what I said is fair and that any staff member, as well as many regular members would point it out as well. Please take my statements into consideration.
Hoping I helped, Yukki Kazuto
First thing I notice is that your account name and your character name are not the same. This is a bit of a problem, especially since it gives the idea that maybe you didn't read everything you were supposed to before joining. I don't know if a staff member can fix it, or if you will have to create a new account. I'm sure we can fix it though.
Second, Your stated spent OM and the things you are purchasing do not match. You have stated you spent 3500 OM, but your powers, proficiencies, and moves add up to 4500 OM.
Third, your move "Spear" How does he attack with it? In a jabbing motion, or is it more of a slashing weapon? Because it doesn't have ranged proficiency, do not expect to be able to go around throwing it. How heavy is it? Can you move while attacking with it?
Fourth, your super move "Jump" Do you hit a target directly with this? Or the ground next to them, which is inferred from you saying it can put you next to a target. What's the charge up on it? How long does it take to activate it, and can you move while doing so?
Finally, as I said before, I'm not a staff member, but peer feedback is a big part of the Omniverse, so I thought I'd lend my assistance in any way I could. A staff member can tell if you can ignore something I said, though I feel like most of what I said is fair and that any staff member, as well as many regular members would point it out as well. Please take my statements into consideration.
Hoping I helped, Yukki Kazuto
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