10-15-2016, 01:36 AM
When exactly in your character’s history were they taken to the Omniverse? Was it right after this engagement, or some time later?
Katana: The base form of this weapon is good, but you’ll need to explain the fire effect a bit more. Does it require a charge time? What effect does the debuff have on the foe? How draining is it on the user? I would give this thread a read as it goes over this process quite thoroughly. Try to be as explicit as possible.
Wakizashi: Much like the Katana, the base form is fine but the Frost effect will also need to be spelled out.
Artificer Spell List: Not entirely sure what is meant here. Please write out what each spell would do and we can price them appropriately.
Wolf Fang Strike: If this is just a simple swing of both swords, you wouldn’t need a move for it. If it’s more complex you’ll need to give me more details.
Some of the minutiae you’ve listed at the bottom is a little confusing to me as I don’t play D&D. Are stances some kind of move you’ll be adding in the future? The weapons blurb seems fine to me if you want your weapons to work like that. Fodder is also fine, but I’m a bit confused by the Infusions part. I assume it’s how you’ll be explaining some of your moves maybe?
Lastly the notes section just seems to be behind the scenes stuff for your benefit, correct? Just making sure.
Katana: The base form of this weapon is good, but you’ll need to explain the fire effect a bit more. Does it require a charge time? What effect does the debuff have on the foe? How draining is it on the user? I would give this thread a read as it goes over this process quite thoroughly. Try to be as explicit as possible.
Wakizashi: Much like the Katana, the base form is fine but the Frost effect will also need to be spelled out.
Artificer Spell List: Not entirely sure what is meant here. Please write out what each spell would do and we can price them appropriately.
Wolf Fang Strike: If this is just a simple swing of both swords, you wouldn’t need a move for it. If it’s more complex you’ll need to give me more details.
Some of the minutiae you’ve listed at the bottom is a little confusing to me as I don’t play D&D. Are stances some kind of move you’ll be adding in the future? The weapons blurb seems fine to me if you want your weapons to work like that. Fodder is also fine, but I’m a bit confused by the Infusions part. I assume it’s how you’ll be explaining some of your moves maybe?
Lastly the notes section just seems to be behind the scenes stuff for your benefit, correct? Just making sure.
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