08-08-2016, 08:36 PM
The people were basically driven out of the way as the rather crude and sadistic Commander took a deep breath. He couldn’t believe some of the stormtroopers were goofing off instead of listening.
Alright, who’s slacking off?!”
The men replied “Nothing, sir… Just thought how nice you looked.”
This earned a well coordinated growl from the fiery redhead Ex-commander.
He hissed and hooked the small weapon on his belt as he eyed the stormtroopers “Anybody actually have a damn map?”
One of the stormtroopers had a holomap nearby showing the irritated man a large map of Tier 1. “This “Jak” you talk of, I don’t...see him on the map.. “
“WELL FIND HIM… I don’t CARE WHAT the hell you have to do to find him.
Erol pinched the edge of his nose and shook his head “Well, MOVE IT!”
The stormtroopers just walked off and started to split off to look for the man named Jak.
Erol looked over at the remaining two stormtroopers “You two are coming with me.. We’ll find Jak the easier way.”
Alright, who’s slacking off?!”
The men replied “Nothing, sir… Just thought how nice you looked.”
This earned a well coordinated growl from the fiery redhead Ex-commander.
He hissed and hooked the small weapon on his belt as he eyed the stormtroopers “Anybody actually have a damn map?”
One of the stormtroopers had a holomap nearby showing the irritated man a large map of Tier 1. “This “Jak” you talk of, I don’t...see him on the map.. “
“WELL FIND HIM… I don’t CARE WHAT the hell you have to do to find him.
Erol pinched the edge of his nose and shook his head “Well, MOVE IT!”
The stormtroopers just walked off and started to split off to look for the man named Jak.
Erol looked over at the remaining two stormtroopers “You two are coming with me.. We’ll find Jak the easier way.”
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Jak/Mar- Dynamite Kid/ DA 2018" (Translated text)
(Thanks Ezzy!)

