06-20-2016, 04:47 PM
Give this thread a thorough reading and be sure to hit all of the bullet points. Your moves are pretty vague and could use some touching up.
Also, you'll need to pay special attention to duration of these effects because as it stands the effects last waaaaay too long.
Also, you'll need to pay special attention to duration of these effects because as it stands the effects last waaaaay too long.
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