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Killua Zoldyck
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Duly noted. On a similar note, do you plan to use your Dark Link (now Dark Link1) and Riku accounts again? If you'd want to use them again after unlocking a second character that'd be fine (you'd need to swap out Dark Link, obviously), just wanted to make sure.


Sharp Claws: You'll need to tone this down a bit, as with an ATK of 2 you won't be slicing limbs and tearing out organs. You’d probably be able to lacerate foes with low DEF, but that’d be the extent. If you'd prefer you can describe it as previously being that strong, but please add a line about it being weaker in the Omniverse setting. Also, the move would cost 300 OM, as that's the going rate for moves.

Rhythm Echo: This might be obvious, but you won’t be able to outright kill anyone with a single move; I’d take that bit out (or add a disclaimer similar to what I mentioned about with Sharp Claws). As this is essentially an afterimage, anyone with a TEC equal to or higher than yours will be able to see through it with effort, as would anyone with the Enhanced Senses power (Foresight would also give them an edge, though less so).

Also, for both moves: are you sure you want to make them take that long to perform? You could reasonably lower the Claws to a second or two (I’d equate it to as fast as someone could draw a dagger) and Rhythm Echo to maybe 3-4 seconds. Just an idea, you’re free to keep it at the current timing if you’d prefer.
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Killua Zoldyck - by Killua Zoldyck - 04-24-2016, 08:24 PM

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