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Killua Zoldyck - Killua Zoldyck - 04-24-2016
Character name: Killua Zoldyck
Character source: Hunter x Hunter
Character history: Taken Pre-Canon - Meaning right after he ran away from home and right before he entered the Hunter Exam.
Physical Description: A pale, short pre-teen male with silver white hair and electric blue eyes. Wears a long sleeved blue shirt under a plain white tee. As well as a pair of dark blue shorts and purple and white sneakers.
Stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 3
SPD: 3
TEC: 2
Starting Proficiencies:
Physical Strength – 1000 OM
Starting Powers:
Burst Movement – 800 OM
Super Jumping – Basic – 300 OM
Stealth – 1200 OM
Starting Moves:
Sharp Claws - (300 OM) Killua has the ability to alter the anatomy in his hands enough to transform them into claws that are as sharp as knives. This process take two seconds to complete in which he can then use them for combat. His nails are lengthened to two inches long with razor sharp tips and are capable of slicing off person's body parts (head, legs, arms) and with enough precision he can even rip out someone's heart. Unfortunately with entering the Omniverse Killua's power extremely low - thus the most his attack can do is cause lacerations on opponents with low DEF at best.
Rhythm Echo - (300 OM) Rhythm Echo is a an advanced version of another technique that is used by members of the Zoldyck family of assassins. An assassination technique that has a total absence of noise as the user walks with varying cadence of steps that leave after images confusing the opponent in which the assassin uses that moment to strike and attempt to harm the target. Due to being a stealth related move Killua only gets one chance to strike the opponent as striking alerts the target to his presence and cancels the technique - thus he cannot do any other attacks after that one strike (Those with Foresight are also able to detect Killua before he strikes) . The after images appear instantly within his vicinity the moment the technique begins and disappear the moment he strikes. They have no actual negative effect on the target and instead are used as distractions for Killua to sneak up on the victim. To start the technique requires Killua to be focused on a singular target - thus requiring his complete focus and concentration to utilize - making him vulnerable to any outside attacks. The process takes three seconds to complete and to utilize effectively. Since this move requires certain specific conditions to use correctly - this technique is not meant for wide and open spaces nor without proper preparation. Due to the weakening effect of entering the Omniverse this technique is much slower and easier to detect and react to due to Killua's lower SPD and ATK. Also anyone with TEC equal or higher than Killua (or having the Enhanced Senses ability) will be able to see through the technique rendering it useless.
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I formally played Dark Link and Riku - so I'm returning (again).
RE: Killua Zoldyck - Minato Namikaze - 04-24-2016
Hi. I noticed that you have another account under the name Tatsuya Oda, did you plan on not using that account now?
RE: Killua Zoldyck - Killua Zoldyck - 04-24-2016
No. sorry. Feel free to delete it!
RE: Killua Zoldyck - Mark - 04-26-2016
Duly noted. On a similar note, do you plan to use your Dark Link (now Dark Link1) and Riku accounts again? If you'd want to use them again after unlocking a second character that'd be fine (you'd need to swap out Dark Link, obviously), just wanted to make sure.
Sharp Claws: You'll need to tone this down a bit, as with an ATK of 2 you won't be slicing limbs and tearing out organs. You’d probably be able to lacerate foes with low DEF, but that’d be the extent. If you'd prefer you can describe it as previously being that strong, but please add a line about it being weaker in the Omniverse setting. Also, the move would cost 300 OM, as that's the going rate for moves.
Rhythm Echo: This might be obvious, but you won’t be able to outright kill anyone with a single move; I’d take that bit out (or add a disclaimer similar to what I mentioned about with Sharp Claws). As this is essentially an afterimage, anyone with a TEC equal to or higher than yours will be able to see through it with effort, as would anyone with the Enhanced Senses power (Foresight would also give them an edge, though less so).
Also, for both moves: are you sure you want to make them take that long to perform? You could reasonably lower the Claws to a second or two (I’d equate it to as fast as someone could draw a dagger) and Rhythm Echo to maybe 3-4 seconds. Just an idea, you’re free to keep it at the current timing if you’d prefer.
RE: Killua Zoldyck - Mark - 04-26-2016
I see you've made some edits, which is good. I wanted to clarify though that Enhanced Senses would be what allows one to see through the afterimages; Foresight would just make it easier to perceive you attacking them.
RE: Killua Zoldyck - Killua Zoldyck - 04-26-2016
I'm not gonna use Dark Link's or Riku's accounts anymore so do with what you will ^^
And should I edit anything else?
(and is it just me or does this site lag A LOT? I have a brand new HP computer and the site still takes a bit to load...)
RE: Killua Zoldyck - Mark - 04-26-2016
I'd add in the bit I mentioned above about Enhanced Senses allowing you to see through the illusion.
Also for Rhythm Echo:
Is Killua able to use other moves at the same time? Does it require concentration?
Do the afterimages persist after the attack, or do they vanish when he attacks?
Are the illusions generated immediately in his vicinity or can they appear at range?
Is the confusion effect simply because there are illusions or is there an actual negative effect on the target?
The site is always a bit laggy for me when I'm not logged in but after I sign in it's nearly always smooth and snappy. The slowness may be due to your account not being approved, but I can't be sure.
RE: Killua Zoldyck - Killua Zoldyck - 04-27-2016
Alright fixed (hopefully) everything ^^
RE: Killua Zoldyck - Mark - 04-27-2016
You still need to put in the blurb about Enhanced Senses allowing one to see through the illusion, like I mentioned a few times above. The Foresight part is really only for when Killua goes in to strike.
RE: Killua Zoldyck - Killua Zoldyck - 04-28-2016
Fixed! (I think...)
RE: Killua Zoldyck - Mark - 04-28-2016
Approved!
Name: Killua Zoldyck
Level: 1
Spent OM: 3900
Proficiencies: (1000); Physical Strength (1000)
Powers: (2300/8000); Basic Super Jumping (300), Burst Movement (800), Stealth (1200)
Moves: (600); Sharp Claws (300), Rhythm Echo (300)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats
ATK: 2
DEF: 3
SPD: 3
TEC: 2
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