08-31-2013, 03:30 AM
http://www.omniverse-rpg.com/viewtopic.php?f=12&t=165
Could you guys give me some critique on how I'm writing so far? What should I improve on? What should I sustain? What suggestions would you have to make things better? Thanks in advance!
Could you guys give me some critique on how I'm writing so far? What should I improve on? What should I sustain? What suggestions would you have to make things better? Thanks in advance!
