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Scrambled Ganon and Dorf - Ganondorf - 08-31-2013
http://www.omniverse-rpg.com/viewtopic.php?f=12&t=165
Could you guys give me some critique on how I'm writing so far? What should I improve on? What should I sustain? What suggestions would you have to make things better? Thanks in advance!