02-04-2016, 11:58 AM
Hi there! Welcome to the Omniverse!
You're history is good but I have some comments on your move.
Charms- This move seems extremely powerful if it lasts up to an hour and an opponent cannot remove it. This also makes it seem like it takes almost no toll on ASPECT which generally is a no. Debilitating moves as such probably should take quite a bit of energy or should be less powerful. Also if you could tell how long it takes to fully charge one move that would be great. Another personal comment is that the move seems a little complex at first. An alternative would be, "It takes "x" seconds for Charm to charge but ASPECT can release it earlier for a diminished effect. These effects can stack up over time up to the full potential of the move" or something to that effect.
Full Spectrum Barrier- This seems fine if it's only defensive
You're history is good but I have some comments on your move.
Charms- This move seems extremely powerful if it lasts up to an hour and an opponent cannot remove it. This also makes it seem like it takes almost no toll on ASPECT which generally is a no. Debilitating moves as such probably should take quite a bit of energy or should be less powerful. Also if you could tell how long it takes to fully charge one move that would be great. Another personal comment is that the move seems a little complex at first. An alternative would be, "It takes "x" seconds for Charm to charge but ASPECT can release it earlier for a diminished effect. These effects can stack up over time up to the full potential of the move" or something to that effect.
Full Spectrum Barrier- This seems fine if it's only defensive
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