Mock Fight: Sans vs Athena Myalo

[Athena Myaló]

Thanks for judging, Jade!!! ||3
(I'm glad you didn't notice any blatant similarity between Athena during this story and Rose's possession towards the beginning/middle of "Like One Sundered Star" - or, if so, you didn't mention it. ||p I intentionally tried to steer away from falling into copying that author's analogies and character-portrayal, but felt that I was getting rather close despite myself. ==" And I didn't even know you were going to be the one doing the evaluation!)

(Heh, the quote you used in Story was mostly meant to get into Athena's calmer [and verrry verbose] method of thinking, and also in a roundabout way make a joke out of her general lack of understanding of "classic" humor, but yeah, it was probably more long-winded than it needed to be. Word limits are a bear indeed. =_=)

Sans, I'll shoot you a PM in a second about a conclusion. Good job, my friend! ||-, (I knew from the beginning you were going to score higher than me in Characterization - you're fantastic at writing Sans's character, and you're pretty accurate from what I know of him. =v=)