12-11-2015, 12:04 PM
In the vein of advice, I have a bit to offer the both of you.
The word limit is 800 words. Neither of you came anywhere close to that limit, severely limiting what you can accomplish in each post. When every word counts, that's a serious blow, limiting exposure to your characters and their mindsets and actions. Try and use as many words as possible, do as much as you can in each post, to give more room for your end scores to be appropriately judged.
The word limit is 800 words. Neither of you came anywhere close to that limit, severely limiting what you can accomplish in each post. When every word counts, that's a serious blow, limiting exposure to your characters and their mindsets and actions. Try and use as many words as possible, do as much as you can in each post, to give more room for your end scores to be appropriately judged.
"Hold on a second, I have a call..."
![[Image: blog-Wesker.jpg]](https://cdn.dcdouglas.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/12/blog-Wesker.jpg)
"Yes, this is Wesker. Go ahead."
"Yes, this is Wesker. Go ahead."