Read It Back

[Gildarts]

I did some prewriting for the thread miranda is currently in and i'd like to have someone look at it. I feel its a powerful moment in miranda's story here and i'd like to amplify that as best as i can. I have went through and proofread it a couple of times, though chances are i probably missed a lot. Could any of you have a look at it? If so I'll pm it.

Heyyo, I'm in the middle of moving -which is stressful- but sent what you want reviewed my way, and I'll hope to get it done in any free time I'm able to find.

I'll check up on your thread too ballad, if I get the chance.