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11-27-2015, 05:20 PM
I did some prewriting for the thread miranda is currently in and i'd like to have someone look at it. I feel its a powerful moment in miranda's story here and i'd like to amplify that as best as i can. I have went through and proofread it a couple of times, though chances are i probably missed a lot. Could any of you have a look at it? If so I'll pm it.
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