Am I doing this right? [Open]

[Tom Marvolo Riddle]

Name: David T. Monroe
Origin: Wizarding World
Born: September 1926 AD
PesterID: [SH]

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M'lady Jade,
Thank you for your reply. I imagine this place would be rather grim without your bright presence especially at the moment. Currently, there does not seem to be much happening other than some nutter fellow named Dean who just crashed his car, purposely, into the City's Gate. Is no one around here sane? I understand my fellow wizards can be a misbegotten people as far as common sense is concerned, and rallying them to a cause is like herding snitches... but this takes it to a new level of idiocy even for a muggle.

Purposely crashing your motor impotently just so it'll burn up?

I really am on the fence about this whole issue... I imagine ol' Potter would be rushing in, wand blazing like the mad hatter seventh year that he is. But he's a Gryffindor, it's expected. This act of senselessness though is pushing it even for a Slytherin like me. We're supposed to be the ones with ambition and cunning but here neither would be useful as there is no clear line as to any solid good choice for maximum outcome. Still though sensible minds must prevail at the very least I can watch and wait for something to happen maybe report like you said.

Anyway... you mentioned Factions, what do you know of them m'dear?

Sincerely,
David Monroe

PS. I haven't had a thoroughly double check my grammatical efforts this time. I can barely hear myself think among all this din.