Joining: Granite

[Minato Namikaze]

In regards to your history, Akame is sort of wrong. You don't need to put much into your backstory in the joining app (The paragraph you have now is mostly fine). However, what you do need to add to it is where and when he actually came to the Omniverse. Any further backstory/ information can be included later, after your application has been accepted.

Your move is actually Fine for the most part. Although, since it's a guarding move, you don't need to take full damage in place of others, it can be lessened to an extent. A way you may want to rationalize this is by having him, somehow, harden his wings while he is using them to guard.