09-04-2015, 02:22 PM
Hey Guu, thanks for taking the time to read my stuff 
I'll be editing the following points in my first post:
History
I'm removing the details about Omni summoning Alexyana and her reactions to it. I've seen a few people's first posts in the Nexus, so I'll likely move what I edit out to there, once I get approved.
Moves
I guess I overthought Dragon Bomb
I figured that because it can be both a large-surface or a focused attack it should have two "modes" rather than one. I'll change the pricing and add some detail to the explanation - and possibly shorten the whole thing while I'm at it, in retrospective I think I may have tried too hard to explain it properly.
I'll also clarify on the Dragon Claws move by adding numbers.
Powers/Proficiencies
Since I indeed only took it for the Dragon Bomb and it's not needed, I'll take off the Buff Proficiency and save my OM for now. Might spend them on items or other powers once I've saved up a bit.
Thanks again for the help!

I'll be editing the following points in my first post:
History
I'm removing the details about Omni summoning Alexyana and her reactions to it. I've seen a few people's first posts in the Nexus, so I'll likely move what I edit out to there, once I get approved.
Moves
I guess I overthought Dragon Bomb
I figured that because it can be both a large-surface or a focused attack it should have two "modes" rather than one. I'll change the pricing and add some detail to the explanation - and possibly shorten the whole thing while I'm at it, in retrospective I think I may have tried too hard to explain it properly.I'll also clarify on the Dragon Claws move by adding numbers.
Powers/Proficiencies
Since I indeed only took it for the Dragon Bomb and it's not needed, I'll take off the Buff Proficiency and save my OM for now. Might spend them on items or other powers once I've saved up a bit.
Thanks again for the help!
"(Note to self: insert quote & picture once I find stuff)"
Quote:

