08-15-2015, 11:30 AM
Looking good so far. I see one issue:
Hardened Metal Frame is super not specific right now. As it stands, it could mean a punch or a kick or a headbutt and that's gonna make it incredibly variable and super expensive. If you want it to be 300, you need to make a move for each one of the individual attacks, like "Hardened Metal Punch" or "Hardened Metal Kick."
Other than that it looks cool on my first glance. Make those changes and post in here and I'll look at it.
Hardened Metal Frame is super not specific right now. As it stands, it could mean a punch or a kick or a headbutt and that's gonna make it incredibly variable and super expensive. If you want it to be 300, you need to make a move for each one of the individual attacks, like "Hardened Metal Punch" or "Hardened Metal Kick."
Other than that it looks cool on my first glance. Make those changes and post in here and I'll look at it.
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