Read It Back

[Albert Wesker]

Just found this thread and it made me realize something. I've been writing and doing this whole RPing thing for over a decade now, and can't recall once ever getting solid, in-depth feedback of any level. It also occurred to me I'm not really sure just how much I ma have improved in that time. Obviously I don't have a reference for how I used to write, but where I am now is something I do have a measure for.

With that said, I would appreciate it much if I could possibly get some feedback on my latest and so far only post with Colonel, which can be found right here.

Compounded with working at the library, and thus having less time than usual for writing, and working with a new character, I'm not so sure of the quality, so I'm sure it's got some flaws somewhere in there, which I probably missed due to the aforementioned reasons, compounded, again, with a somewhat poor mood and poor sleep for the past long while.

On a semi-related note, if anyone feels like it or has time, I would also love feedback on my....'work' as Adam. This thread is probably the best example I have of him. Not asking for a look at the whole thread, even as relatively short as it is, just perhaps a post or two, if you have the time/desire to do so.

And while I cannot promise I am the best judge of such things ('best' being quite subjective, anyway), I can also offer to take a look at things for other people if you so desire.

Many thanks in advance to anyone who may decide to offer feedback.