06-20-2015, 05:35 AM
I really appreciate the read! I also hadn't noticed that Thaal had literally managed to avoid EVERYTHING. I think I got so caught up in his frailty that I forgot that he could be injured and not INSTANTLY die haha.
I was also really fuzzy on Roland, and you're very likely correct that I got the character wrong. I've been trying to find good examples of his character, but I think I just need to read Dark Tower haha.
Thanks again for the read, and every ounce of your critique was valid and useful Big G
I was also really fuzzy on Roland, and you're very likely correct that I got the character wrong. I've been trying to find good examples of his character, but I think I just need to read Dark Tower haha.
Thanks again for the read, and every ounce of your critique was valid and useful Big G


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