06-10-2015, 08:00 PM
I like John Connor, and the beginning is short and sweet. The beginning sentence added a good hook for the reader's mind to grapple with and hinge on.
Question: which movie have you take him from, I'm not sure I know his age?
Question: which movie have you take him from, I'm not sure I know his age?

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