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John Connor test posts - Jak Mar - 06-10-2015 The future has not been written. There is no fate but what we make for ourselves." The timeline had been screwed with... John stared at a computer typing up information about Skynet and much more. He was the chosen one, the leader, the one that was supposed to lead the human resistance against Skynet... But how was he going to do this now that ... he never finished his trailing thoughts as he disappeared from where he was at. That's when panic began to arise among the human resistance.. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After arriving in the Omniverse: John felt himself falling... into nothing... A white space with some strange fountain. His eyes quickly moved to the area and he started to panic.. "No... NO! I have to go home! The Human Resistance needs me!" He stopped in his tracks trying to catch his breath when a creature began to introduce himself Quote:My name is Omni. This is not the world you know." Ok, let me get this straight? You rip me from my mom and my friends and this war against Skynet for this?"- Oh... wait.. I suppose terminators not chasing me is a good thing, right?" No response... John stared at the god creature named Omni "I get it, I'm dead right?" .... "Come on, SAY something!" I hate not being responded to... John stood there frustrated... Re: John Connor test posts - Gildarts - 06-10-2015 I like John Connor, and the beginning is short and sweet. The beginning sentence added a good hook for the reader's mind to grapple with and hinge on. Question: which movie have you take him from, I'm not sure I know his age? Re: John Connor test posts - Jak Mar - 06-10-2015 I'm either wanting to bring John in as a young adult or adult here. He sort of sounds teenagerish here though. Either Terminator: Sarah Connor Chronicles or adult John Connor. Re: John Connor test posts - Gildarts - 06-10-2015 Woo!! Can't wait to see your choice, he has a lot of potential and not just in coruscant, as for age. Both would be interesting, it might just be interaction based for the effects of your choice Re: John Connor test posts - Jak Mar - 06-10-2015 Should be kind of interesting though, It's going to be hard to have him compete with a lot of people with powers here though XD Re: John Connor test posts - Gildarts - 06-10-2015 That's true, but just get him the BFG. -crossing fandom lines- Re: John Connor test posts - Jak Mar - 06-10-2015 *hint hint* Either that or swipe that BFG from Doomguy Not really. Re: John Connor test posts - Cloud Strife - 06-10-2015 Don't forget, you can't change the intro to the omniverse and you can't interact with omni besides thinking to yourself... Re: John Connor test posts - Gildarts - 06-10-2015 :wha: Re: John Connor test posts - Jak Mar - 06-10-2015 I'm kidding!!!! Re: John Connor test posts - Cloud Strife - 06-10-2015 Apparantly my keyboard doesn't like typing the word 'Can't' that's multiple times now.... Edited my reply to have the correct wording Re: John Connor test posts - Jak Mar - 06-10-2015 Alright, i was curious. I'll take out the omni part then ^_^" |