Marine and Malcontent- Discussion

[Victor Wolfe]

Thanks for judging the fight Gil, I agree with all that you said, Grammer has always been a weak point for me but I will try and work on it , I re-read my roleplay from the start and feel I need to focus my character a bit more, I think I know how I am going to do that, I will definitely take the believability into account next time I write. Congrats Okor, it was really fun working with you