04-17-2015, 03:44 PM
I've read a couple posts here and there.
You are definitely improving as a writer. You're getting better at just letting the story flow out naturally, instead of forcing an unnecessary pace.
If you want some critique you can build from, heres some advice . . .
Try to cut down on passive verbs and adverbs. That way your sentences will have more meaning. Usually, you can find a unique verb that replaces them.
You are definitely improving as a writer. You're getting better at just letting the story flow out naturally, instead of forcing an unnecessary pace.
If you want some critique you can build from, heres some advice . . .
Try to cut down on passive verbs and adverbs. That way your sentences will have more meaning. Usually, you can find a unique verb that replaces them.
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