04-04-2015, 07:53 AM
Thanks so much for your feedback Proto! I'll definitely keep an eye out for the things you mentioned next time I make some posts, though ive always had that little problem with changing my tenses randomly though my writing, seems like it sticks around no matter how much I try to get rid of it 
Also to answer your question, Crona generally flicks in demeanor between a scared little kid and a crazed battle-trance, and tends to lean more towards the latter the more injured he becomes, which is why he became more docile after he regenerated. The real Crona is definitely his shy side, though.
And to Sivo and Jon, it was great fun writing with you ^^ I'm not sure if/when our characters would meet again so I figured I should say how much I enjoyed the thread just in case.

Also to answer your question, Crona generally flicks in demeanor between a scared little kid and a crazed battle-trance, and tends to lean more towards the latter the more injured he becomes, which is why he became more docile after he regenerated. The real Crona is definitely his shy side, though.
And to Sivo and Jon, it was great fun writing with you ^^ I'm not sure if/when our characters would meet again so I figured I should say how much I enjoyed the thread just in case.
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