Erza Scarlet

[Sarah_Kerrigan]

Everything looks alright except this last bit on one of your Moves:

While using the Flame Sword, Erza can infuse it with the power of fire by concentrating for a moment, essentially setting the blade aflame with magical energy and turning it into a more flexible, slightly longer katana made of pure fire. This lasts 20 seconds. Since this greatly increases the power of the weapon, it costs a significant amount of magical energy, much more than most requips, and as such can only be used once per fight. [/spoiler]

Only power ups and certain items can actually increase your power. This sounds awfully like it is increasing your attack - which is a no no. Basically, the only way to do that would be to give the activation of the 'flames' a downside or something like it which would inherently increase it's power; having it be active for only 20 seconds doesn't really count as a flaw.

Also please realize that your different 'armors' are purely cosmetic in the form you are submitting them. One couldn't give increased defense/offense etc. Please remove any bits that imply the stat changes. Like I think in one case you said it offers greater mobility . . . for example. If you want to go that route, you'll need to make them proper alternate forms. Otherwise you are essentially paying for the varying weapon types.