Daemon and the Devout Discussion

[Proto Man]

Please please please don't take this the wrong way, guys, but can we all stop rehashing the previous post(s)? I know that you want to try and add your character's view to 'the action' or include their spin on things, but, as a reader, I don't want to have to read the same quote or see the same scuffle redone from a different perspective. This is especially important here, because you only have a length restriction. Keep it all fresh, you can incorporate their motivations and monologue a midst new punches.

I only say this because I'm keeping running feedback and I've made this same remark in all the posts, although for Round 2 this seems to be a shrinking issue.

This is a very brutal fight. Keep at it.