03-05-2015, 01:30 PM
Some quick things
Telepathic Suggestion: This doesn't seem too bad other than the fact that you can abuse it too much seeing as it has little to no cool down. If you add some fatigue factor or another form of balance I think there should be no problem
Psychic Spiral: I don't think you need a move with this due to the fact that you can already send images and other distracting thoughts into the opponents head, but if you wanted a charge for a lasting effect then this is fine. The thing is that a minute is quite some time so cut down the duration time a little bit. Also same criticism as before, make sure you balance it with Fatigue or something so this can't be overly spammed.
Telepathic Suggestion: This doesn't seem too bad other than the fact that you can abuse it too much seeing as it has little to no cool down. If you add some fatigue factor or another form of balance I think there should be no problem
Psychic Spiral: I don't think you need a move with this due to the fact that you can already send images and other distracting thoughts into the opponents head, but if you wanted a charge for a lasting effect then this is fine. The thing is that a minute is quite some time so cut down the duration time a little bit. Also same criticism as before, make sure you balance it with Fatigue or something so this can't be overly spammed.
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