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Re: Jace Beleren - Atelos - 03-05-2015
Some quick things
Telepathic Suggestion: This doesn't seem too bad other than the fact that you can abuse it too much seeing as it has little to no cool down. If you add some fatigue factor or another form of balance I think there should be no problem
Psychic Spiral: I don't think you need a move with this due to the fact that you can already send images and other distracting thoughts into the opponents head, but if you wanted a charge for a lasting effect then this is fine. The thing is that a minute is quite some time so cut down the duration time a little bit. Also same criticism as before, make sure you balance it with Fatigue or something so this can't be overly spammed.
Re: Jace Beleren - Jace Beleren - 03-05-2015
Telepathic Suggestion (Requires Telepathy, Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency): 300 OM
Jace telepathically suggests a course of action to the target, fooling them into thinking it was their idea all along. The more uncharacteristic the action is of the target, the more easily they can shake off the effects of this move (e.g., suggesting the target walk around the corner would succeed with little difficulty, whereas suggesting they kill their best friend would be nearly impossible unless they had critically low TEC). Sending a telepathic suggestion requires several seconds of intense concentration, rendering it untenable in frenzied combat. This move is more effective when used in conjunction with Psychic Spiral. Successive uses of Telepathic Suggestion within an hour-long period will be less likely to succeed as the target builds a tolerance for the spell.
Psychic Spiral (Requires Telepathy, Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency): 300 OM
Bombards the target's mind with chaotic images and disorienting thoughts, making it difficult to make sense of the world around them. Targets affected by Psychic Spiral are more susceptible to all forms of psionic intrusion. It takes a few seconds of concentration to send a basic Psychic Spiral lasting five to ten seconds. The longer Jace concentrates when casting this spell, the longer the effect persists, up to a maximum of ten seconds of concentration and thirty seconds of effect. Successive uses of Psychic Spiral within an hour-long period will be less likely to succeed as the target builds a tolerance for the spell.
Re: Jace Beleren - Atelos - 03-05-2015
I'll have Omni look at the moves since it's basically the first in the site, however you may submit those in the Move Approval and I'll approve you without the moves if you want to RP
Re: Jace Beleren - Jace Beleren - 03-07-2015
Done, and done.
Re: Jace Beleren - Atelos - 03-07-2015
Name:Jace Beleren
Level: 1
Spent OM: 3200
Proficiencies:Ranged(1000) Debuff(1000)
Powers: Telepathy(1200)
Moves:
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK:1
DEF:2
SPD:2
TEC:5
Alright then you're good to go, well have Omni look over those moves soon. I'll get your log set up shorty