OC Help?

[Trixie]

I guess it's my turn to ask for some help on whether or not these ideas suck. I've got two solid candidates right now that I'm looking to try and write. Thoughts? 

OC 1

Dragon Form (When Purchased Later)

Palaxia - Ancient Golden Dragon - Lawful Good Alignment --  Fought against Red Dragon's during the Lich War. Eventually was assigned to look after a mortal human who had gained the ability to turn into a Golden Dragon via the Wish Spell named Vad. She was the deciding vote to make him Emissary of the Golden Brood later in life. She arrives in the OV after admitting to herself that she has feelings of love for the now Immortal level 20 Human Fighter.

Name: Palaxia, Lady of the Golden Brood
Character Source: Dungeons and Dragons OC

Spent OM: 4,500

Proficiencies (2000): Physical Proficiency (1000), Ranged Proficieny (1000) 

Powers (1200/8000): Master Acrobat (400), Burst Movement (800)

Moves (300): Golden Halberd (300), Fury of the Brood (300)

Super Moves (0): 

Transformations (0): 

Assists (0):

Items: 

Artefacts:

Consumed OM (0): 

Bases: 

Unlocks (1000): Stat Upgrade I (1000)

Base Statistics: 

ATK: 2  
DEF: 3 
SPD: 4 
TEC: 2

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OC 2

 

Natural and Veteran Zoid Pilot of Ancient Murasame Liger, member of Peasant Army in  Custom Timeline -- Corporal in Army only for the fact that she's a proven pilot, hated by the rest of her the comrades due to driving an outdated piece of junk. Even if it is one of the few Liger's remaining on the Planet. Hails from Dead Zone, battle torn area of the planet where refugees and people who have lost everything due to the war have flocked to setup camp. Has evolved into a shanty city with the appearances of Gidi Prime (Dune reference). The city is one giant slum. Liger is mostly functional as only the blade works, and for that reason, Ember is a very skilled close quarters pilot. 

Name: Ember Ramsey
Character Source: Zoids OC

Zoid: Defunct Murasame Liger
Status: In Disrepair, Functional


Faction: None
Rank: Corporal
Division: 53rd Zoid Reserve Force -- "Peasant's Army"

Spent OM: 4,700

Proficiencies (1000): Physical Proficiency (1000)

Powers (400/8000): Master Acrobat (400)

Moves (300): Murasame Blade (300), 

Super Moves (0): 

Transformations (0): 

Assists (0):

Items: 

Artefacts:

Consumed OM (0): 

Bases: 

Unlocks (3000): Stat Upgrade I (1000), Alternate Form (Murasame Liger) (2000)

Base Statistics: 

Pilot      Zoid(AF)

ATK: 3     ATK: 4           
DEF: 4     DEF: 2
SPD: 2     SPD: 3
TEC: 2     TEC: 2


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OC 3 !?!?!?!

  

Seia, Raven Goddess of Death and Destiny

Commandant of Pantheon Army

Progenitor of House Zulenka after Fall of Pantheon

The gist? A full blown goddess. Raven Polymorph. Terrifyingly good at combat. Bird like appearance and abilities -- cosmic in nature.