07-08-2018, 03:49 AM
This thread was good, I noticed a strong level of writing that ive not seen with many npc's before, those that i would consider this to be close to are ones written by sammy, so to start things off, thats a major positive.
“20,000 credits, good as cash anywhere outside of Camelot,” This line made me giggle, it gives so much information detailing the situations revolving around Coruscant and Camelot without sounding political, VERY WELL written
All of these npc's seem to have a life all of thier own, mainly in regards one minuet they are gambling the next IT WAS A FIREFIGHT!
and the tortureous scene in the end where amera held the revolver on charlie slowly drawing it out. was arguably my favorite part.
all in all this was an enjoyable read for me, albeit a bit long, id probably recommend for a great bonus if this had not already received a bonus.
“20,000 credits, good as cash anywhere outside of Camelot,” This line made me giggle, it gives so much information detailing the situations revolving around Coruscant and Camelot without sounding political, VERY WELL written
All of these npc's seem to have a life all of thier own, mainly in regards one minuet they are gambling the next IT WAS A FIREFIGHT!
and the tortureous scene in the end where amera held the revolver on charlie slowly drawing it out. was arguably my favorite part.
all in all this was an enjoyable read for me, albeit a bit long, id probably recommend for a great bonus if this had not already received a bonus.