07-07-2018, 05:08 PM
(07-07-2018, 04:55 PM)Luci Wrote: Hello Melk, and welcome to the Omniverse! There are a few issues with your app I wanted to discuss before senior member takes a look at your app.
I see that you have only used 5 stat points, although your character is allocated 10 stats points.
It would also be helpfull if you added a length to your rapier.
Finally your move Gale Thrust is not descriptive enough. It seems to be a single fast strike, which doesn't normally require it's own Move. Please add a bit more description of the move.
You might also consider making Gale Thrust a Supermove, which is what it sounds like to me.
Thank you for the feedback, i have decided not to use gale thrust as it basically just another way she uses her rapier and my stats have been edited to fit 10 points.