07-07-2018, 04:55 PM
Hello Melk, and welcome to the Omniverse! There are a few issues with your app I wanted to discuss before senior member takes a look at your app.
I see that you have only used 5 stat points, although your character is allocated 10 stats points.
It would also be helpfull if you added a length to your rapier.
Finally your move Gale Thrust is not descriptive enough. It seems to be a single fast strike, which doesn't normally require it's own Move. Please add a bit more description of the move.
You might also consider making Gale Thrust a Supermove, which is what it sounds like to me.
I see that you have only used 5 stat points, although your character is allocated 10 stats points.
It would also be helpfull if you added a length to your rapier.
Finally your move Gale Thrust is not descriptive enough. It seems to be a single fast strike, which doesn't normally require it's own Move. Please add a bit more description of the move.
You might also consider making Gale Thrust a Supermove, which is what it sounds like to me.
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