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Character Switch: Gwendolyn
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Just a couple things to note:

-- For the move, you could do exactly what you're wanting to do there without a move. Even as a move, it wouldn't actually restore any actual Damage that had been dealt. There's nothing wrong with it, per se, but....as it's currently written it gives almost no actual use or benefit.
-- Starting with just the Ranged proficiency, you'll need some kind of weapon or means to defend yourself effectively. If you decide to stick with your move as-is, you could trade Ranged for Physical Strength or something rather than any other moves.
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Character Switch: Gwendolyn - by Gwendolyn - 05-23-2018, 09:12 PM

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